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日本語版これ

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CarameLatte

Her face at the bottom is VERY CUTE <3 <3 <3

エックス

とても素晴らしいです!

Don Juan

If I may make a suggestion for the translation. In English, we don't use "Teacher" as an honorific like "Sensei". We usually just use Mr. or Ms. depending on gender. In some cases people just use "Sensei" in English translation because "Teacher" sounds awkward. So maybe change to "Imoyama-Sensei" or "Mr. Imoyama".

Don Juan

Also some suggestions for better English. Pg. 1 Panel 1 Imoyama Bubble 3 "Nishida, are you making fun of me again? Don't call me "Kimoyama." Nishida Bubble 4 "I'm not making fun of you, I just misspoke." Panel 2 Nishida Bubble 2 "Is that my responsibility?" Imoyama Bubble 3 "That disrespectful attitude of yours is not fit for a student." Panel 3 Nishida Bubble 1 "Eh, I don't want to be thought of like that. Why don't you educate me in the Student Consultation Room?"

Don Juan

Pg. 2 Panel 1 Imoyama Bubble 1 "You got naked as soon as we walked in. Perhaps you are an honest student." Nishida Bubble 2 "I keep telling you, but you keep misunderstanding me, sensei." Imoyama Bubble 3 "Alright, then let's have sex all night. Also, no condoms, I can't judge you unless we do that. How's that sound?" Panel 2 Nishida Bubble 1 "I don't hate having sex with you. Aw, poke me harder, Kimoyama-sensei!" Imoyama Bubble 2 "You said it again!" Panel 3 Imoyama Bubble 1 "You're pussy is very tight! I'm coming inside! Take it all, Nishida!"

MistaLOD

Hey, is there a chance I could help out with English translations from now on? I think having a native speaker at least do a final edit would make it a lot more readable, instead of it sounding like it went through DeepL without any foresight.