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Rory Mercury WIP update (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2025-12-03 09:41:50
Edited:
2025-12-03 10:23:52
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Another update! i might need some suggestion help to fix grammar and sentence here (⌐■_■)

also, this is conveniently censored enough right?

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Marima

Wow...super hot

rou271
>>10600476

Yoshaaa, thank you senpai! i kinda jealous of your interaction pose tho

rou271
>>10600767

2 characters doing interaction, i still always have hard time doing it, what i draw mostly is jist one characters solo "adventure" lol

Marima
>>10600895

Ohhh I see ^^ I feel like I cheat a lot there, like hiding 1 body behind the other, and it doesn't feel too great to do

Mewcoplasma

Homg the expressions are insane

rou271
>>10602052

i studied xD, i've been only good for drawing static cool expression, but always afraid to do genki or extreme suffering expression. Glad you like it tho

delta

This looks great, to see how even a powerful demigod like Rory can end up drowning like this <3

NeonPhoenix

This is awesome, Its also cool to see someone ask for grammar feedback! I would love to help, do you want suggestions in the comments?

delta
>>10607770

Yeah I also liked how you did draw her lungs being empty and then filling up with water ^^

NeonPhoenix
>>10609730

Sorry, didn't get the notification that you replied! Here are my suggestions: - 'Mr guest please don't create trouble' should be 'Mr Guest please don't cause trouble' - 'We're not intent to start trouble' should be either 'We don't intend to start trouble' or 'We're not here to start trouble' - 'I had the urge' should be either 'I have the urge' or 'I have to pee' - 'Why I feel weak' should be 'Why do I feel weak?' - 'My lung flooded!' should be 'My lungs flooded!' - 'Let me breath!' should be 'Let me breathe!' - 'How long... I'm gonna drown... And revive again' should be 'How long... Am I gonna drown... And revive again?' Hope this helps! Your artwork is amazing and I always look forward to seeing more!

rou271
>>10686610

for this : How long... Am I gonna drown... And revive again? should it be "revive" or "revived?"