Mona for Mora Script (Pixiv Fanbox)

The script for, tentative title, Mona for Mora, a Mona X Aether body swap comic. Some parts may not make it into the final version.

Story Plot

Mona tries to pick up an expensive book she reserved but discovers she's broke when she tries to pick it up. The bookseller (Marjorie) threatens to send it back but Aether happens to notice them when walking past and offers to pay in exchange for a go in Mona's body. Mona hesitantly accepts thinking he means sex, when he actually wants to try swapping bodies.

Aether buys the book and they head back to Mona’s place. Mona hesitantly asks him how he wants to get started. Aether pulls out a book and uses it to swap bodies with Mona. Mona is visibly pissed at the misunderstanding.

Mona asks him how long it's going to be for and Aether isn’t sure as he hadn’t fully read it. Mona reads the book which details they need to have sex to undo the swap before the full moon or risk the swap becoming permanent to change back. Aether has no intention of having sex with himself and escapes.

Aether wanders the streets and meets Fischl who mistakes him for Mona and they hang out for a bit walking around Mondstadt. Aether tries to buy food from Sara at Good Hunter but realises Mona's broke and begs Fischl to pay for him, promising “I” (Mona) will assist her with a commission. Fischl starts paying when Mona as Aether finds them and drags Aether back to her House. Aether is upset he didn’t get the food he ordered.

Mona’s pissed he’s out making promises in her body but Aether changes to subject to ask how her search is getting on. Mona says she read the whole book and found nothing else on the subject. They’ll have to fuck, Aether suggests asking Lisa or Sucrose for help but Mona rejects it not wanting anyone to learn she technically agreed to this. Aether goes for the door but Mona locked it with the key that she's holding.

Aether gives up resisting and Mona starts to lead but isn’t sure what she’s doing. Mona follows what she’d do if she were masturbating.

Starts rubbing his breasts? Gets annoyed at her tights and just rips them to start fingering him. Aether dislikes being treated this way and starts jerking Mona off with his hand. They continue awkwardly knocking into each other? Mona gets fed up and picks Aether up by the ass cheeks and ploughs her dick into him all the way. Above view of aether’s unexpecting reaction? Standing sex. Aether starts resisting and Mona falls back onto a sofa or bed? Aether starts leading cowgirl style? More sex positions? Artists choice. They fuck until they black out. Aether wakes up to Mona making food who says he needs to take responsibility.

Aether escapes out the door with the key he now has. Mona thinks in 9 months he might have to after the amount they fucked. End

Main Story Script plan:

Page 1

Mona enters the bookstore, With Wind Comes Glory.

Mona enters the store and tries to pick up an expensive book she reserved from Marjorie who is standing behind the counter. Marjorie is looking at the shelves behind the counter (out of view) as Mona enters behind her.

MONA: Hey Marjorie! Has that book I ordered arrived?

Marjorie, now facing Mona, pulls out a book from below the counter and Mona starts pulling out her purse.

MARJORIE: It has, Mona. It’ll be 15500 Mora.

MONA: Sure, Marjorie.

Mona opens her purse and it’s empty.

MONA: Could I pay you back in installments?

Marjorie crosses her arms with a disappointed expression

MARJORIE: I have a business to run, Mona. If you can’t pay, I’ll have to send it back.

(small text beside the text box): It wasn’t cheap.

Mona starts panicking, Aether is seen peering in the window.

MONA: Ah, no. Please don’t do that! I need that book.

Aether enters behind Mona and offers to pay.

AETHER: Hey Mona, short on Mora?

Mona turns around and is apologetically begging him to pay. If not too busy, show Marjorie still disappointed behind Mona and some of the back of Aether’s head on the edge of the panel.

MONA: Traveler! Sorry, would you mind?

AETHER: Sure, but…

Traveler approaches Mona.

Show both Mona and Aether standing from above the knees or waist, Aether’s sideways on to the viewer whispering in Mona’s ear. Mona’s facing the viewer surprised by Aether's request.

Zoomed in view of Aether’s mouth whispering into Mona’s ear.

AETHER: Only if I can have a go with your body after this.

Mona has a troubled expression, but is thinking about Aether’s request. Hand on her chin and other arm on her opposite arms elbow.

MONA (thought): I really need this book.. I knew Traveler couldn’t keep his eyes off my ass but he could have approached me more romantically…

Mona smiles nervously at Aether…

MONA: Sure… Traveler.

Aether drops a money bag on the desk. Marjorie smiles in return.

AETHER: Put the extra on my tab.

MARJORIE: Sure thing, Traveler.

Aether and Mona start exiting the store, book in hand. Mona carrying the book.

MONA: Thanks Traveler.

They walk together to Mona’s place.

AETHER: What’s the book about?

MONA: It’s an updated astrology guide.

They arrive at Mona’s house.

AETHER: I thought you already had an astrology book?

MONA: It was very old and started falling apart...

Mona places the book on a desk. Aether is standing by the door behind her.

MONA (Blushing): You didn’t need to go about it this way, I don’t exactly dislike you..

Mona turns to face Aether.

MONA: I’m.. not very experienced at this. How do you want to start?

Aether starts getting out a book from his inventory. Like an RPG, it basically appears out of thin air.

AETHER: I’ve never done this sort of thing before either.

Mona is stunned seeing Aether pull out a book.

MONA: I guess we’re both in the same boat then, but are you seriously looking up how to do it right before?

Aether proudly holds up the book in front of Mona, show Mona’s back and ass on the edge of the panel if feasible.

AETHER: Of course, this book I got from Hilichurls in Stormterror's lair explains how to do it.

Aether starts reading through the book. View from over his shoulder.

Aether starts reading out ancient text/magic spells from the book, Mona looks on in confusion, unable to understand what he’s saying.

MONA: What are you rea—

Mona is cut off by the book swapping their souls. Show Mona’s soul slipping out of her back upwards with her body in front with a blank expression. Her soul is a lightish blue and naked with a confused expression.

Aether’s soul is also pulled out of his body upwards and naked. His soul is a lightish grey.

Aether’s soul is sucked into Mona’s body as if it's being sucked down a drain into her chest. Past the back of Aether’s head with Mona’s soul being sucked into his body.

Fades to black.

Blurry POV Blink showing Mona’s chest.

POV view from “Mona’s” perspective looking at her breasts with her hands open and arms showing beside her breasts.

Another POV from Mona’s body perspective. Show the bottom of Mona’s hat and top of her fingers as “Mona” looks at “Aether”. Who is standing by the door looking down at himself with a confused expression with the book in one hand.

Person (Body)

MONA (in Aether): –ding?

Another POV view from “Mona’s” perspective looking at her breasts again. This time both her hands are groping her breasts (Aether inside her body, groping her breasts POV View.)

AETHER: Firmer than I thought...

Mona (inside Aether’s body) standing and grabs Aether's body’s chest.

MONA (Aether): What the heck is this?

Aether (inside Mona's body) bends upper body forward, turns head back looking at ass and grabs Mona’s ass with both her hands. (view from a low behind angle) legs only slightly bent.

AETHER (Mona): The body swapping passage really worked!

Small SFX black text beside the speech bubble: Soft…

Mona (inside Aether’s body) is visibly distressed and shouting at Aether inside her body who’s surprised by his body suddenly shouting at him.

MONA (Aether): Body swapping what? This is what you wanted? My body?

AETHER (Mona): Yeah… I found it in that book and wanted to give it a go.

Mona clutches her head (in Aether’s body)

MONA (thought): I shouldn’t have accepted his offer…

MONA: Ugh.. Fine. How long are we like this for?

Full view of Aether inside Mona's body from above the knees panicking and unable to look at Mona.

AETHER (Mona): Oh, uh. I’m not sure. I haven’t finished reading it.

MONA (Aether): What? You did this without fully reading it?

Aether (inside Mona’s body) looks away from Mona ashamed.

MONA (A): I'll read it.

(small text beside the text box): *Sigh*

MONA (inside Aether’s body) starts flicking through the book

Mona shouts at Aether whilst blushing.

MONA (A): Traveler! If we don’t have sexual intercourse before the next full moon, we'll be stuck like this permanently.

AETHER (M): When’s that?

MONA (A): Tomorrow night!

AETHER (M): Oh..

Aether checks out Mona’s body unintentionally spreading her legs in a standing position. Viewing from below.

AETHER (thought): There’s no way I'm having sex with myself like this.

Mona continues reading the book.

MONA (A): We have time, so I’ll keep reading, but I don’t think we’ll have a choice Traveler... Traveler?

Mona looks over to where Aether was standing inside her body and Aether has disappeared from the house.

MONA (A): Ugh, Where did he go?

Aether sneaks out into the streets to avoid Mona. He walks watching behind himself.

AETHER (thought): Have sex like this? With myself? No way! I just wanted to try out what the book said...

AETHER (thought): If I leave her alone long enough, she’ll figure something out. She usually does.

Aether wanders the streets and meets Fischl who's standing outside a stand and mistakes him for Mona.

FISCHL: Huh? Mona? Ah– The mighty astrologer! Were you not busy today?

AETHER (M): Oh, I, er, stepped out for some fresh air. What’re you up to, Fischl?

FISCHL: Gathering, Would thou wish to follow?

AETHER (M): Sure!

Aether (inside Mona) and Fischl hang out for a bit walking around Mondstadt together. x2

Aether (Inside Mona) tries to buy food from Sara at Good Hunter. Aether standing in front of the counter with Fischl behind him.

AETHER (M): Hey Sara, can I have a Grilled fish to go?

SARA: Sure thing, that’ll be 600 Mora.

Aether wide eyes? Realises Mona is broke.

AETHER (M): Ah.

Aether turns around to Fischl who is behind him.

AETHER (M): Hey, Fischl. Could you…

Fischl with her hands on her hips and a disappointed expression.

FISCHL: I believe thou still owes me for last time.

AETHER (M): Ahahaha… Can I make it up to you by helping with that commission you're struggling with?

Fischl is surprised by his offer and pulls out a money bag.

FISCHL: Oh? Sure. Here, Sara.

AETHER (M): Thanks!

Aether turns around and jumps/is surprised to see his body walking up to them with an angry expression. Show from behind Aether inside Mona’s body with Mona inside Aether’s body walking up to them.

MONA (A): Aeth- Mona!

AETHER (M): Crap.

MONA (inside Aether’s body) grabs Aether inside her body by the arm and looks to Fischl.

MONA (A): Sorry Fischl, I need Mona for something.

FISCH: Oh, okay…

Mona drags Aether back to her House.

Inside Mona’s house, Aether is upset he didn’t get the food he ordered. Mona standing further inside on the edge of the panel.

AETHER (M): I didn’t even get to eat my fish.

Mona turns and yells at Aether with an angry expression. Aether reacts with a worried expression and tries to change the subject.

MONA (A): What do you think you’re playing at, making promises in my body!

AETHER (M): Sorry, Mona! How’s your search going?

Mona grimaces and holds her forehead with one hand.

MONA (A): Ugh, as I suspected, there were no other solutions in the book.

AETHER (M): Wait, so…

Mona with a very serious and intimidating expression.

MONA (A): We must have sex tonight to return to normal.

Aether starts panicking and suggesting ideas to avoid having sex in Mona’s body. Mona is completely against involving others with their embarrassing situation.

AETHER (M): What if we asked Lisa or Sucrose? Surely they might know something?

MONA (A): There’s no way I'm telling anyone I technically agreed to this! We’re dealing with this tonight.

Small black text: And never speaking of it ever again.

Aether makes a break for the door.

Aether tries to open the door but it's locked.

AETHER (M): The door…

MONA (A): Looking for this?

Mona dangles the key in front of Aether with a devastated expression?

MONA (A): I’m not letting you escape again, we’re fixing this tonight.

Aether looks at Mona’s bulge (in his body's pants) with an embarrassed expression.

AETHER (M): Ugh… fine

Mona’s soul sighing?

MONA (A): I don’t want to do this anymore than you do but you created this mess!

AETHER (M): …

Aether gives up resisting, rubbing Mona's legs together and looking away embarrassed.

AETHER (M): Where do we begin?

Mona starts getting embarrassed and approaches Aether to lead but isn’t sure what she’s doing.

MONA thinks: Why do I have to do this, I don’t know where to start…

Mona looking at Aether’s breasts decides to follow what she’d normally do if she were masturbating.

MONA thinks: I’ll just do what I usually do alone…

Mona starts rubbing Aether’s breasts. Awkwardly?

Mona moves one hand lower towards Aether’s crotch.

Mona realises she can’t get her hand into her tights and pushes her fingers through them to start fingering him.

MONA (A): How do I get these off...? Eh, whatever, I'll make Traveler buy new ones.

Mona fingers Aether’s pussy (bodies swapped) with Aether’s reactions to Mona’s fingers.

Aether dislikes being treated this way and notices Mona’s bulge in her pants. (Aether’s body’s pants)

AETHER (M): I’m not going to be the only one being embarrassed like this

Aether puts his hand in Mona’s pants and starts jerking Mona off with his hand, popping her boner out of her pants.

They continue awkwardly jerking each other off? POV from “Mona”’s perspective of them

More awkward fondling.

Mona looks at her wet hand.

MONA (A): This should be good enough.

Mona grabs both of Aether’s ass cheeks.

Aether feels embarrassed / isn’t ready / panicking at the sudden ass grab?

AETHER (M): Huhh? W-wait, Mona!

Mona picks Aether up by his ass cheeks and ploughs her dick into him all the way. Above view of Aether’s unexpecting reaction to taking his dick all the way in?

Small panels behind the pose with their souls showing their reactions on their own faces. OR x-ray of dick insertion?

Aether’s lewd expression on Mona’s face to being fucked, with soul version copy behind it?

Mona with an intense blushing expression, same again with soul reaction behind.

MONA (A): You’re squeezing me so tightly.

Standing sex. Aether starts hugging Mona over shoulders. Mona lifting Aether’s legs off the floor. Optional: Hat falls off and is not worn from here on?

Mona bends Aether over the table and fucks Aether's in doggy style leaning against table.

MONA (A): We need to do it as much as we can to be sure.

Zoomed in view on dick in pussy

Another angle of doggy style on table.

Mona standing, turns Aether on his side lifting one of Aether's legs up as he's laying on the table.

MONA (A): Your stamina is amazing Traveler!

Aether starts resisting and Mona falls back onto the floor and Aether starts leading cowgirl style.

Aether (M): Aah! Here. That’s it!

They fuck until they black out.

Main focus of explicit scene pages being “Mona” taking it in a large scale position with smaller panels in the gaps behind where possible.

Sunrise in the window

Aether wakes up back inside his body to Mona making food. Mona isn’t wearing any tights from now on, bare legs because they were ruined last night.

Mona walks in carrying food, Aether watches her ass.

MONA: Good morning.

AETHER: Morning…

Mona puts food on a small table.

MONA: You’d better take responsibility for last night.

AETHER: Huh?

Mona hides her mouth expression with the food tray looking away from Aether who's still sitting down where he woke up..

MONA: I didn’t wear any condoms last night.

AETHER: Ah...

Aether starts panicking where he's sitting whilst Mona looks away with a grin on her face.

MONA thinks: He doesn’t need to know it’s not my time for a few more days.

Mona looks back at Aether.

MONA thinks: Though there is research about strong seed persisting for longer and there aren't many people stronger than Traveler.

Aether drops the key Mona had kept in his pocket on the floor as Mona leaves the room.

Aether stares at the key.

AETHER: The key…

Mona comes back into the room.

MONA: You shouldn’t have to worry too much about last night, Traveler. Traveler?

Aether is gone and the door is wide open with the key in the lock. (Aether escaped using the key) Mona standing looking out with her hands on her hips.

MONA: Oh well, letting him sweat for a while isn’t a bad punishment.

END