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Translation Assistance:joshua.croker1


Again, I had a hard time translating.

Is the onomatopoeia "ずらり" correct for "line up"?


[2023/04/28 update]

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joshua.croker1

Panel 1: '"dressed like this" should be "looking like this" "I can't help it" should be "It can't be helped" "Please keep gassing up there" should be "stay here while I do the shopping." Panel 2: "Senior Tina is waiting outside the store" should just be "Senior Tina is waiting outside." Panel 3: "Tina should give them sweet potatoes that have gone a little bad right?" Should be "It's ok to give your friend some sweet potatoes that are a little off right?" Panel 4: "To withstand this lead fill it with gas again to generate buoyancy!" should be "You'll have to really balloon up to carry all this stuff!" "why do they give me" should be "why did they give me"

森野聖樹

There were many sentences that had to be in the past tense.... Thanks for pointing that out! I have corrected it!