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Is it hot and you want some ice cream?


[2024/06/13 DeviantArtでも無料公開しました]

https://www.deviantart.com/seijyumorino/art/Lets-make-summer-snaks-1063142859

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joshua.croker1

Panal 1: 'Something is melting' should be 'I think I might be melting...' 'Somehow I melted it.' should be 'Somehow I must have melted her...' Panel 2: 'Is it not refrigerated?' should be 'Isn't that a fridge?' Panel 5: 'and the stick is going deeper and deeper' should be '. That sticks getting deeper...' 'Isn't what Chiffon is doing more egregious then I am?' should be 'Isn't what you're doing more egregious then just melting her?'