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I want to this to have no dialogues since I've been doing that a lot,

but.. I'm kinda second guessing myself.

You know what, whatever dialogues you have in mind is probably

better than what I thought of.

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Personally, I especially liked the dialogue on the Marisa comic with the rain. Especially her reaction to seeing it for the first time. The one with Youmu being caught by Yuyuko and Yuyuko just shrugging it off was pretty good, too.

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That being said, if you don't want to add dialogue to a piece, I don't think you have to - my point is that your dialogues may be better than you think.

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And this one works well as it is - the story is expressed well through the art itself. I don't think adding dialogue would really improve this one.