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Beverly Brat - Full Comic (50 pages) (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2023-04-21 06:12:58
Edited:
2024-10-04 17:51:49
Imported:
2026-06
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'Beverly Stratt is a rich, spoiled young girl who plans a big party while her parents are away. However, when two mistreated workmen catch wind of the scheme, her weekend plans might take a slight detour...'

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DAETO

Very nice comic

Michael Driston

That was amazing, but I was really waiting for Bruno to tap in Bob for the double team. And, she kept the bra on?! You're a tease, brother! Awesome work!

AltCor
>>5726292

Thank you. Bob is the kind of guy who is OK with justice being served even if its not by his hand. And considering it's just domestic discipline I think the bra coming off would have been a little bit out of place.

Michael Driston
>>5734050

Couldn't agree more about the bra, it clearly would have changed the tone (and helped support Bev's accusation of Bruno being a pervert). I'm hoping, however, that she'll make another appearance in one of your delightful renderings without that particular undergarment. The work really was amazing. I've never seen a spanking comic that long and certainly never one that well-done. It really allowed you to set the scene, define the characters and invest us in the story. It makes her comeuppance all the more delicious when it finally comes, and is shown from so many wonderful angles. I do have one question, and that is Bev's reaction when Bruno and Bob get up to leave. She almost seems crestfallen by their departure. Was she feeling some sort of attachment from finally being rightly disciplined, or was it simply shock that they were actually, finally leaving?

AltCor
>>5737308

Thanks. I wanted to make long comics precisely because you can flesh out the characters and make readers feel invested in the story. It's very different to watch a spanking scene featuring a girl you feel you know rather than some random character with no background or personality. I see Beverly as a girl that never had real discipline growing up and now that she is experiencing it for the first time she finds herself being very obedient and cooperative, like there is a part of her that is naturally submissive and was never explored before. She is not dissappointed because the guys are leaving, she is more like suddenly being brought back to reality which feels a little bit shocking at first but then she quickly reverts to old bratty Beverly.

Michael Driston
>>5737819

Okay, wow, that makes much more sense than what I had thought was the reason. You did a good job illustrating that, I just missed it. So, for a short time, she was a somewhat well-behaved young lady who found a momentary contentment by embracing her innate submissiveness and was so centered in it that she (happily) shed her old identity as a self-centered brat for a short time. Almost like she was in the sub headspace, and when they left she came crashing back to earth, fully embracing her old, repulsive personality. Well, I almost feel sorry for her now. Here's hoping a Dom will cross her path and give her another chance to embrace a more peaceful and contented life, rather than the shallow, meaningless existence she now occupies. I feel invested in the character and hope we get to see her again. Thanks for taking the time to provide such a cogent and detailed explanation. It is much appreciated, as is your excellent work!

ndidi

This is a work of genius. You are a genius 🤩 Beverley is a fantastic character. I wish I could summon up some of that "spoilt bitch energy" sometimes!! I can't believe she didn't know what a screwdriver is! And . . . er . . . that other thing. Anyway, she fixed the problem which shows she is both smart and determined. You go girl! I want to see more of her. And as a submissive this was a very erotic story. I'll be downloading this to my iPad so I can read it again and again 😝😊🥰

ndidi
>>5737308

Yeah, I also thought she looked a bit crestfallen! This really makes me want to see more of her, she is such a fun character. I love bad girls 😄

AltCor
>>6314194

I'm happy you enjoyed it this much and thanks for the 'genius' thing ;). I hope my stories can be good enough to keep people entertained.