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This concludes chapter 2 of "Modify and Offer Yagami Kazuma's Body to the Demon"

『ヤガミカズマの身体を改造して悪魔に捧げよ』の第2章は以上です

《改造并献上八神和真的身体给恶魔》的第2章到此结束。

『야가미 카즈마의 몸을 개조해서 악마에게 바쳐라』 제2장을 마칩니다.

นี่คือบทสรุปของบทที่ 2 ของ 'ปรับเปลี่ยนและถวายร่างของยากามิ คาซึมะ แก่ปีศาจ'


I hope you enjoyed this chapter! I’d love to hear your thoughts—what worked for you, what didn’t, and any suggestions you might have. Your feedback helps me refine my writing and make future stories even better. Thanks so much for your support!

P.S. Stay tuned—a brand-new original series is coming soon!


この章はいかがでしたか? 気に入った点、改善点など、ぜひ感想をお聞かせください。今後の作品作りに活かしていきたいので、よろしくお願いします! サポートありがとうございます!

P.S. 新しいオリジナルシリーズも近日公開予定です!


希望你喜欢这一章!欢迎告诉我你的想法——喜欢哪些部分,不喜欢哪些部分,或者有什么建议。你的反馈能帮助我改进写作,让未来的作品更精彩!感谢你的支持!

P.S. 全新原创系列即将上线,敬请期待!


이번 챕터가 마음에 드셨으면 좋겠습니다! 어떤 부분이 좋았는지, 아쉬운 점은 없는지 의견을 남겨주세요. 여러분의 피드백은 제 글을 더 다듬고, 다음 작품을 더욱 풍부하게 만드는 데 도움이 됩니다. 항상 응원해 주셔서 감사합니다!

P.S. 곧 새로운 오리지널 시리즈가 찾아옵니다!


หวังว่าคุณจะชอบบทนี้นะ! ถ้ามีความคิดเห็นว่าชอบจุดไหน หรืออยากให้ปรับปรุงอะไรบ้าง ก็บอกได้เลยค่ะ คำติชมของคุณจะช่วยให้งานเขียนของฉันพัฒนาขึ้น ขอบคุณสำหรับการสนับสนุนเสมอมา!

P.S. เร็วๆ นี้จะมีซีรีส์ต้นฉบับใหม่มาอีกแล้วนะ

Comments

顔学書

Is there any other way besides fanbox?

血舐めたろう

Honestly, I wasn't expecting much when kazuma1 first started (because at that time I wanted to see the hyoga episode as soon as possible). But your work was wonderful and I went to watch the original because of it. kazuma is strong and masculine, it was exciting to see him being tortured like that and your work showed the beauty of his body in the best way possible.There are so many of my favorite scenes, such as 1.05, where I was looking at this work about whether or not the mighty kazuma would be torn in half by the tentacles just like that. Another example is 1.11, where the mighty kazuma, who used to be proud and invincible, is grabbed by the tentacles by his most private balls, unable to escape, and becomes like Erwin's livestock, at his mercy.

血舐めたろう

In 2.10, Kazuma's long body is shown to perfection. And although kazuma doesn't seem to be shy about showing off his “male symbols” in the original series (as deduced from the hot spring episode, where he's completely nude and still acts calmly and unobtrusively even after he's been seen), the humiliation of having his most intimate organ in the hands of his enemy is great. And I sensed from Erwin's lines that he might castrate kazuma. but instead of doing it right away, Erwin castrates kazuma near the end of chapter 2. this satisfies both that we get to see kazuma castrated, and that we get to see a few more WORKS of a kazuma that still has a penis, which is awesome. Personally, I feel the only thing I expected was that it would have been better if the castration wasn't done all at one work, but in 2 3 pictures, showing more of kazuma's resistance and desperation in the process.😆

暗月玄灵

个人来说,非常喜欢剧情中对于于八神和麻身材的描述,以及肌肉线条的刻画,个人来说,无论是八神和麻1.01的身体状态,还是2.10已经被改造后的肌肉线条,都有不同的特性,都是非常让人着迷,还有2.14中八神和麻无法合拢的后面,2.18中体内的分镜都是非常不错的画面,相对于第一部中1.14和1.16的后面的状态,2.14和2.18的画面给了我一种即便身体被折磨许久,但是身体依旧没有完全崩坏,可以继续玩弄的感觉,非常有趣,我看2.08中有钻入下体的触手,个人感觉如果能够增加对于下体玩弄,控制射精的剧情画面就更棒了,比如说堵住出口,最后来个大喷发之类的,最后从个人角度来说,更喜欢Guro-Free (非グロ)的内容,不过Guro-Free (非グロ)中,八神和麻依旧无法逃脱下体被剪断的情况是我没想到的,个人来说有些无法接受,如果能够像Saint Seiya 的紫龙一样,没被剪断的话,就更好了,还有就是深蓝色的背景与蓝色的文字有些接近,导致看的时候比较麻烦,希望下次可以避免这种背景与文字颜色接近的情况,或者是加个白色边框之类的

暗月玄灵

如果可以的话,希望可以不仅仅是开发后面;道具或者是触手也可以是史莱姆,将男性的性器官开发到极致,从而彻底掌控他高潮的权利,除了可以无论精神上怎么反抗和抗拒,也无法阻止身体的高潮,也可以即便是身体明显到达了极限,也无法成功射精之类的。