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魅足の園 Ep.172「酔っ払いOL④」 (Pixiv Fanbox)

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2024-03-27 22:00:00
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2026-06
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これまでの魅足の園 -List of Episodes-

https://nush-advance.fanbox.cc/tags/Mitari_no_Sono

▼日本語

4話で1章の構成、少し短すぎるかな？




▼English

Do you think the story of a chapter in 4 episodes is too short?





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i_remu

No seems like good pace ! 😁 I wish we could see more sex though 👀😩

Bigbaby

They are a little too short considering what we're paying, this is good quality work but if you could extend it by at least 2 pages, thatd be great

porcot

Here is an idea. What about you draw non-erotic story in black and white? And only the erotic scenes are in color? This way you can develop the story more properly, while focusing on the erotic scenes. It is a win-win.

Sonic875

I was hoping there was going to be foot licking in this, but can’t expect everything I guess.

Noobman

Its a good size no too short no too long to get overworked, i would like to now if her mom has the same trouble with tickles like chise.

Noobman
>>7194124

I support this plot parts can be B&W and action parts in color so you can give more development to the characters and the story

Rockfraise

I think that it would be great to have some short story like that and some story who are a bit longer. You could alternate more often (sorry for my english 😅)

K. Mocola

I enjoy this length for side character moments like this, though I do miss longer stories like the beach or field trip that incorporated many of the main girls.

守破離

んん…ちょっと物足りない気がする もう一話で２人とケイの本番セックスが見たかった😓 まぁでもそのおかげでマオファミリーのチャプターを少し早めに見ることができますので結局オーライかな？😁

X

Missed out on a little more mother daughter action but not too bad either

KaptainVIDjin

I think 4 episodes is a good base for narration. I might prefer more episodes when it come to major events like the beach, but it depends on what you want to tell and if it will fit in one chapter. On a selfish note, i wouldn't be sad with 1 or 2 pages more on the last 2 chapters. I had the feeling that an extra page would have let us sink a bit more in the erotic moment. But i don't want to put too much of a burden on you. I love your work, keep up like that !

crimzn

I do miss the long stories with plot continuity. The hike and the dirty feet worship made me fall in love with Mao and Akane. Mao's slave training made me fall for her even harder. The pedicure story made me fall in love with Touka and inspired me to pedicure my gf. Aoi and Seiren were love at first sight with their beauty, smelly feet, and dominant attitude. The giantess story was exciting to me personally and made me team Mao and Seiren for life. I would've liked to see that ending expanded on and tied in. I've also been very happy with the rough sketch quality, and sometimes I look forward to those more than the main story because there's a chance to see great scenes with my favorite characters more often; ie. Seiren! I would sub just for the sketches, so I'd be open to seeing the main story in rough quality if it allowed you to make more content. If we ask a lot it's only because you set the bar so high Nush. We appreciate you for creating this world and sharing it with us!

うい

先生の足舐め回みたいです！！ 女の子同士の回も見たいです！

波形鸟

能不能画下蓝色头发的母亲的章节啊，特别好看Can you draw the chapter on the mother with blue hair? It's really nice

PK

Sealed by her sweaty OL pantyhose - so hot!! Chise's mom is a new favorite!