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こんにちは、cold eyes!natyzです。


メインディッシュが遅くなってしまい申し訳ありません!!!!!

待っていてくださって本当にありがとうございます!


今回はTHE TRIGGERシリーズで、

廃校へ逃げ込んだ2人組のキャラクターを主人公にしています!

前作とかなり似たプロットですが、その中でエロティシズムを強化してみようと努力した試験作だと思っていただければ嬉しいです!


そして以前お見せした立ち絵CGは、私の意図よりも少し痩せすぎた体型に描かれてしまった感があったので、

引き締まった体つきで立ち絵CGをもう一度制作しました!hehehe 皆さんにも美味しく感じてもらえたら嬉しいです!


次の作品では、ナラティブの改善を目標にして、スクリプト作成にもう少し時間をかけてみようと思います。

次の漫画はsuzuran chanになる可能性が高いですが、途中でsidedishが1つ先に出るかもしれません。

あるいは、そのままsuzuran chanになるかもしれません!


今日は大好きなcold eyesたちの意見を見て、いろいろなインスピレーションを得ることができ、新しく試してみたいことがたくさんあります。

それでは、ひとまずいろいろ試してみながら、今月中旬ごろに戻ってこようと思います!

いつもありがとうございます!愛しています!!!!!


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大家好,cold eyes!我是natyz。


很抱歉主菜来晚了!!!!! 真的非常感谢大家愿意等待!

这次是THE TRIGGER系列,主角是逃进废校的双人组角色!

虽然剧情和前作非常相似,但希望大家能把它看作是一部在这个框架中努力强化了情色感的试验作品!


另外,之前给大家看过的站立CG,感觉比我的本意看起来有些太瘦了,

所以这次我又重新制作了一版更结实紧致体型的站立CG!hehehe 希望大家也能觉得很美味!


下一部作品,我会以改善叙事为目标,在脚本创作上投入更多时间。

下一部漫画很有可能会是suzuran chan,不过中途也可能会先出一个sidedish。

或者,也有可能直接就是suzuran chan!


今天看了我亲爱的cold eyes们的意见后,我得到了很多灵感,也有很多新的东西想要尝试。

那么,我会先去尝试各种各样的东西,预计在这个月中旬左右回来!

一直以来真的非常感谢!爱你们!!!!!


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Hello, cold eyes! This is natyz.


I’m so sorry the main dish is late!!!!! Thank you so much for waiting!

This time, it’s part of the THE TRIGGER series, starring a duo of characters who escaped into an abandoned school!

The plot is very similar to the previous work, but I’d be happy if you could see it as an experimental piece where I tried to strengthen the eroticism within that setup!


Also, the standing CG I showed before felt like it depicted the body a little thinner than I intended,

so I worked on the standing CG once again with a firmer, more toned body! hehehe I hope it tastes good to all of you too!


For the next work, I’ll aim to improve the narrative and spend a bit more time on writing the script.

The next manga will most likely be suzuran chan, but a sidedish might come out first in between.

Or it might go straight to suzuran chan!


After reading the opinions of my beloved cold eyes today, I gained all kinds of inspiration, and there are many new things I want to try.

So for now, I’ll try experimenting with various things and come back around the middle of this month!

Thank you always! I love you!!!!!

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Comments

ALIENLEMON

Let me get a taste of this new manga(╹ڡ╹ )

ALIENLEMON

It looks good. It would be even better if there were some depiction of the struggle or the process of the clothing coming off.like“OL”theme one.It might be even more interesting if either Ayano or Mio were made to watch the other's current situation via a live stream, and then one of them was "eliminated.",It would also be great to add a wider variety of firearms—such as heavy sniper rifles, shotguns, Desert Eagles, revolvers, and crossbows or compound bows—as their differing power and range would result in different types of damage.just some ideas.😋

ALIENLEMON

If the manga opened with a scene or two showing the pair sniping down enemy soldiers, the subsequent capture would feel more like a case of "justified retribution"—while also heightening the sense of tragedy. It would create a scenario where, faced with an inescapable dragnet, a glimmer of hope emerges, only to be crushed by the sheer despair of the ladder collapsing just as they are on the verge of scaling the high wall.

ALIENLEMON

Overall, it’s quite good. The characters are suddenly snatched away by an "accident" before they even have time to fully experience despair or grief—perhaps that reflects the absurdity and tragedy of war. For Mio and Ayano, it might even be a form of release. (In my own imagined scenario, if Mio realized Ayano had been captured and chose to attempt a solo rescue, only to accidentally shoot and kill Ayano, the sense of despair would be far greater. Mio would then collapse, powerless and consumed by guilt and remorse, leaving herself to be dragged away by the enemy for whatever fate awaited her next.)

ALIENLEMON

👍In short, please get some good rest and take some time to recharge. I look forward to seeing excellent works from this series and others in the future.(╹ڡ╹ )

natyz

哦,对了,“脱掉衣服”的场景之前也被请求过几次,真的很想在下一部作品里细致地加入进去!suzuran chan这次我应该冷静一点,好好整理一下目前收到的各种请求再开始制作。 唔嗯……我在犹豫这个月先提供一篇 sidedish,然后花一个月左右的时间来制作スズラン……呜啊,也很好奇 cold eyes 们会怎么想……毕竟不到一个月的时间,要制作一篇全彩的主线漫画,感觉还是稍微有点不够。 我也一直在烦恼,如果我更从容一点地进行制作,大家会不会理解我呢。真是甜蜜的烦恼!;w;

ALIENLEMON

I think it’s actually fine! Good ideas or suggestions can be put to use in future projects. While I understand your desire as a creator to make every piece of work absolutely perfect, trying out new concepts is valuable; even if an idea doesn't fit this time, there will eventually be an opportunity to use it. There is no need to dwell on the past—just be bold in your future experiments and explorations. As readers, we certainly remember and admire the high-quality works that have been polished through extensive experience, but the earlier, perhaps less dazzling attempts were a necessary part of that journey. In a sense, it’s like rolling the dice: if you try enough times, you’re bound to produce a massive hit or a universally acclaimed masterpiece.

ALIENLEMON

I don't think there's any need to rush the "Suzuran" arc; feel free to explore other ideas first—after all, good things are worth the wait. Personally, while I’ve followed the author's work since the very early days and always thought it was great, the releases that truly captivated me were FB28, 32, 34, 37, and the Yoshino issue. The character expressions, poses, and storylines were all incredibly compelling! The work from '25 is truly impressive. Please keep up the great work and continue creating while you're feeling inspired and energized!

natyz

太感动了!!!!!!!!!!!! ;w; 非常感谢你一直以来温柔的话语,以及对我很有帮助的观后感!我会继续努力的! 你举例的那些 FB故事也很不错呢~ 我很喜欢那种悲剧!啊啊,真是太美味了……!我想创作更多悲剧!下一个 sidedish 要不要试着做成悲剧故事呢……roxy 也很不错,最近的 re:faded truth 我也很满意。TRIGGER EXTRA 也很好呢!那真的是我写得非常满意的悲剧故事。 啊,我好像意识到了什么……!有种发现了自己擅长的东西的感觉?谢谢你给了我灵感!真的帮了我很多!☺😋😋🌸🌸🌸🔥🔥🔥

HitomiCQBR

简直就是艺术品!尤其是胸部与臀部的阴影展现出的肉感简直赏心悦目!观赏起来像是在Sex高潮时被枪击般拥有色情的冲击性! 不过我倒是有个问题一直想问,就是角色死后口腔处塞的类似纸片一样的物品的作用是什么?擦拭精液和防止血液逆流吗?我不太确定(

natyz

哦哦!!谢谢你温柔的话语!😘 很高兴你仔细看了胸部和臀部! 这次我想试着画更有丰满感的身体,感觉实现得还不错,所以很开心! hehehe 死后被塞在嘴里的那种纸片,可以是纸巾,也可以根据世界观设定变成白布! 我以前曾经看过一部作品,是把袜子塞进死去少女的嘴里,从那天起我就深深迷上了这种元素。 有些国家在葬礼习俗中,也有把嘴巴或孔洞堵住的风俗,这也会让我联想到那种感觉。 那是为了防止脏东西继续流出来而堵住的做法,虽然本来是为了保持清洁的手段,但那种看起来很激烈的感觉,对我来说真的是非常美味的元素!

18橘

大佬的作品依舊非常美麗呀🥰😍

HitomiCQBR

感谢您的回答🙏🏻《THE TRIGGER》和《THE ASSAULT》系列是我最喜欢的系列了!武装少女的题材非常对我胃口,尤其是这两部里的两位粉毛角色! 以后有考虑在完结(或者阶段性完结)的时候描绘她们出征前合照和被攻陷后被收集在停尸间里摆在一起的尸体一类的总集篇内容嘛?

ALIENLEMON

36 assault3 50 52 53 also in my toptier ranklist,59 very good too but personally i think keep some more sence with the iceknife in the wound would be better?or maybenot,cant tell.maybe just personally interest.The changing facial expression, gradually losing vitality and sinking into despair is the key, i think.and i also like"do excution while in insertion" just like Assault3 page12-13 .in fact i like most of the works,but for personal taste,some of these i enjoy better for my own interest

ALIENLEMON

Sometimes the pacing feels like a fighting game: first, a probing phase (the setup); then, a combo that drains most of the health bar (the mid-game); followed by a finishing move to seal the match(エロ処刑or death by some other reason); and finally, the main event or the second half of the story begins. I think the balance between the mid-game and the final phase could be adjusted depending on the work—some stories might benefit from having more narrative buildup before the "finisher," while others could do with less, or even skip it entirely.

natyz

感谢你的分享!!!!!! 很好,你越是能把自己感受到的情绪原原本本地告诉我,我越开心!hehe~ 我个人觉得,你和我的喜好其实相当接近。 尝试去贴合你的喜好真的很有趣,而且这也会成为我的成长! 如果你以后也能继续像这样分享给我,我会非常开心的😊😊😊😊😊 这不是客套话,真的对我帮助很大! 一想到下一部作品里能试着运用今天领悟到的东西,我就很兴奋~ hehehehehe

natyz

很高兴你能喜欢我过去作品里的角色!!!😊😊😊 嗯……!关于这一点,我会认真考虑的! 不过,那些女孩分别属于不同的学校,也都迎来了各自不同的结局,所以现在马上把她们集中到同一个外传里,可能还是有点困难。 等将来我变得更加成熟,能够创作出更有连接点、也更有核心凝聚力的故事和角色时!到那时我一定会认真考虑的! 武装JK少女项目对我来说是一次非常试验性的挑战,不过现在也终于开始一点点摸索出属于它自己的味道了!heheehe

113225

美味,谢谢款待😋 好喜欢Page_012,我记得以前的作品里也出现过这种吐舌头的画面,无论是少女自己吐舌头,还是被敌人把舌头拉出来,都非常美味😇😇😇

113225

Page_013里血液和尿液混合在一起,这也是让人印象深刻的🥰

natyz

!!!! 谢谢你看得这么开心😋😋😋🥰🥰🥰 hehehehe 你觉得很 tasty,真是太好了!!!!! 这次制作的时候,我经常想到你!其实以爆头作为主题时,我本来想把你喜欢的脑浆飞溅、或是能看到更细致组织的表现进一步升级一下的…… 但因为一些私人原因,必须稍微缩小作品规模,所以这次没能挑战这一点,感觉有点可惜 ;w; 不过关于少女的表情,我是一边回想你的建议一边制作的! 子弹嵌进头部、眼球朝天空翻上去的少女表情,真的很 tasty 呢😋

R

太可惜了,我也好喜欢爆头

113225

那么晚了还没睡吗😨你能在制作的过程中想到我 让我非常感动😭睡前能够享用到你的tasty作品真是太好了🥰🥰🥰我先睡觉了,你也早点休息ZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzz…………

natyz

hehehehe!!!!!,今天辛苦啦,请您好好休息吧🥰🥰🥰Zzzzzzzz 谢谢您在睡前还看了我的漫画🥰 我……因为这次漫画收尾的时间有点紧,所以已经醒着超过48小时了。不过一上传完漫画,就觉得特别有成就感,结果反而一点睡意都没有了!😆

natyz

啊,不是48小时,大概是30小时左右!不过我现在已经到极限了……我也该睡觉了……Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...........🥰

沃伦

😋👍🏻,021中的身体侧面曲线太棒了,感觉乳房软软的,想把脸埋进去🥵🥵…………😭

natyz

hehehehehehehe 谢谢你开心地阅读!😘 我同意!!!!! ayano chan's body 😋😋😋😋 t a s t y ~

Odabuchi

Good as always. Is there any closed eyes scenes in tasting of suzuran chan's cute dead body?

113225

oh no,这已经是超人了。升天😇😇😇😇😇

natyz

Hello! Thank you for enjoying it😋🥰 Of course! Suzuran chan’s manga will definitely have a closed eyes scene. but, I’m considering including a closed eyes version together with it, just like I did with RE:Faded truth 01, so I might make separate versions for open eyes and closed eyes! This main dish felt like I rushed it a little, so for the next main dish, I’m thinking I’d like to take my time more calmly and strengthen the content hehehe!!

Robby Dao

Amazing! If only there were scenes where they were wearing their gear during the erotic scenes.

natyz

thank you for enjoying it!!!!!!🥰🥰😙 oh, yeah! pretty sure. I’ll keep it in mind that when working on the next gun fun series~

风荫

从核吧慕名而来,画得人物很可爱呢,大佬画得好👌🏻

natyz

oh!是中国的社区网站吗?! hehehehehehe 非常感谢你温柔的话语和关注🥰🥰🥰 希望你能在这里度过一段愉快的时间!😘

natyz

hi, cold eyes~! I’ll upload a new post next week! I’m planning to serve a sidedish, and I’m also preparing information about the next main dish, suzuran chan! hehehehe I’ll be back soon! Love~😘

natyz

cold eyes!!! i’ll upload the new post on JST monday at 10:00 pm! i’m dealing with a critical health issue, so i’ll just rest for one day ;w;.... i’m sorry i couldn’t finish preparing everything before sunday!!!!@!@!dasfsad on monday, i’ll provide 2 sidedishes and previews for 2 main dishes. (suzuran chan, and one more. will be really tasty hehehe) i’m planning to upload both main dishes at the same time in july, and i’ll include as much content as i possibly can, also including closed eyes versions, so please look forward to them!😘