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Empty Nest Rewind? (Poll) (Patreon)

Published:
2024-09-18 19:52:31
Edited:
2024-09-19 20:37:39
Imported:
2026-06
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Poll

Empty Nest Rewind? (Poll)

  • Yes, rewind and reset. (Story will be shorter with less twists and turns but still lots of good lovin.) 13
  • No, stay the course. (Story will stretch out as Heather and Elliot figure out their forbidden love.) 37
  • 2024-09-18
  • —2024-09-19
  • 50 votes
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Content

Okay, I don't like doing this but I've done it once before after that wild alien detour on Prejac Zach and y'all steered me in the right direction in that case. So let's try it again.

Based on the comments on the previous two Empty Nest chapters (thank you for all of your input btw) it seems that I have horrendously dropped the ball on Heather trying to protect Elliot from her permanently addictive powers out of care for his well-being. And a smut story just ain't gonna work if the main love interested is actively disliked by the readers.

Before I take on the slings and arrows from the free site readers when these chapters are posted I'm going to pause and give you all the option of me rewinding the past couple of chapters and take another run at it.

I will leave this poll active until Friday. Edit: I'm ending this early as the outcome is clear. Thank you all for participating as well as all of the comments.  ❤

Comments

Rayn

Moshe

Hey man, I think you should stick to your guns on this one. If people can't handle a bit of drama or conflict in their smut, then they haven't been paying attention to your work over the years. Yes, the smut scenes are great, but your depictions of conflicts, inner turmoil, and all the ups and downs of the characters is what makes your writing stand out. Maybe we readers get a bit impatient for some action sometimes, but isn't that what the shorts are for? Anyway, sorry for the wall of text, just wanted to share my thoughts on all of this 😅

grimbous

Thank you! I hope you're right. ❤

grimbous

Maybe it's much ado about nothing. I think I'm still scarred from SfH. lol Thank you, Moshe. ❤

Moshe

I think the thing with SfH was, at least for me personally, that it felt like it came out of nowhere right at the end of the story, and for people who aren't into cuckold stuff, myself included, it was just a bit jarring. Here, you can really sense why Heather wants to do this and since the story (hopefully) isn't near the end, there's room for explaining everything.

Rrffcre

I say keep it the way it is. I get being scared of SfH all over again but I can think of a few major differences: MC isn't being cucked by the Milf, MC can pursue other romance options freely, and the Milf & "husband" relationship would be very different. I think the rub for a lot of people was more about Allen cucking MC rather than the Milf having another guy in the picture. I say keep up the drama as long there is good kinky fun in the mix. I kind of like the idea of getting with a girl and them both entertaining Heather.

Dakeyress

Depends, if both look for a time for something else (both with someone else) but end up really together i could get behind and wait, but it they end up just in the cheating plan that Heather explained, i'm not too up for it. I'm not picking one vote as both don't really convince me unless i'd know what lies ahead of both route, but that would be ruining the possible fun if I knew.

Christian

I still think Heather's daughter might be a good direction to follow. Elliot and Heather's time should be special. There time is a building and expanding experience for elliot. While a reawakening and the push Heather needs for her life to be more complete and brighter. Heather daughter was already going to be a plot point and I do think that her and Elliot could be a good direction because she can have a man who takes all she can give without the fear of refusal or being view as a freak. And Heather gets that meternal need to take care of some and build them up, while having a bit of kinky experimentation. Still it would be a bit of a different way to go than most of the story's I've read from you. This might be a fun go because Elliot and Heather still get a loving connecting while Heather gets the knowledge that her daughter has a fine hardworking man who really care about her and Heather. A family built back from a darker turn on all fronts. Also Heather's daughter is a hospital employee so she's sure to have some stress to workout and you could play with that a lot. Also Heather's daughter knows that her mom got a burst of life inserted after Elliot came into her life and unlike her brother did everything to make her mother's life easier and better. A good starting point because her phone call was geared towards making sure her mother wasn't hurting herself to look after a new guy who would use her for personal game. Like trying to make Heather say a bad thing about Elliot so she could be sure her mom wasn't being taken advantage of. Her reaction to Elliot being a positive and beneficial influence on her mom might make a good story point. A chance for a story about how you can have special memorable times that come to an end but leave you better than you were and ready for the rest of your life. Also I've always viewed cuckold as more the established relationship kind of decision instead of a new doomed romance like decision. even if Elliot and Heather aren't doomed as much as a brief if bright kinda love. Finally Elliot is a special kind of honey boy thar Heather hasn't had before but apparently her daughter has so that might be a fun story point to.

Immortan

My main gripe is the "forever addicted", i would simply change it to just an addiction, somewhat like nicotine, maybe slightly stronger, that would be more "believable" and less doomer. I also think Lily should eventually come into play (maybe part 2), no incest , i know patreon isnt very found of that, but more of a permanent solution to Elliot ( i have already commented on that, make it the reason why he was bullied by Liam, Lily had a crush on him in HS).

Bearista

I think you're doing just fine. Any romance is going to have it's drama. I think you're doing an excellent job, I just like to complain when stories hit me in the feels.

Nope

I trust in Grimbo

grimbous

One of the things that I love about this story is the twist on the addictive futa cum trope. It's kind of interesting to me exploring that idea with a woman who actually appreciates the ramifications of it.

BLauert

Would really love to see the relationship between Elliot and Heather blossoming, just waiting for Heather to snap and just say fuck it (maybe with a cure for the addiction or smth) The dynamic being old futa / young male, is also what i expected from this story, hope that does not change

Lantern

Yes very much agree, stay the course.

Lantern

I think the storyline is fine as long as Elliot and Heather end up together in the end. Use your artistic ability to navigate the way.

Lantern

Also the idea of someone being hopelessly in love with someone and then growing an addiction to them to further their love is so fucking hot. The addiction becomes a bonus not a negative. So fucking hot

Eromage

I think this is a great opportunity to have a more active/heroic/seductive? protagonist, Why not have Elliot do some real soul searching and along with his boost to confidence and growing love/affectiond have him seduce Heather? I'd love to see that! He's already proved to be difficult for Heather to say no to...