Please? [WIP] (Patreon)

For this one, I made a lot of silly mistakes lol I was trying to draw faster but ended up catching a lot of mistakes when doing the lineart. You can see all the changes done in the final pictures. I had some fun working on this one and got this done a lot faster than my previous comic. I guess its because I didn't focus too much on making a bg. I'll try doing more bgs like this. I won't stop learning how to make bgs I just want the comics to focus more on the characters.