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Help me check the language before posting read for free on twitter and bluesky.

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OmaShiji

I really like this piece of hair it makes me feel hot 🔥

SBastian

Only suggestion is page 5. Change "be...if they saw they father in this condition..." to "be...if they saw their father in this condition..."

SBastian

Maybe page 6 too. Looks like he's trying to say "Let me give!!" Change to "Let me go!!"