FP #4 p1 pencils (Patreon)

Here are the pencils for the first page of issue 4.

 I did some rearranging from the layout to vary the sizes of the figures in the panels and to match up the direction of the faces with the flow of reading and with the positions of the figure in the other panels. 

I am still not sure about the male figure in the central panel- he feels a bit squashed. I might move him up a bit and stretch his torso.

I will probably wind up redrawing a bit too much and damaging the bristol board.