The Heat of Dorne Chapter 20 (Patreon)

The finale of the King's Landing arc, in which Daemon says goodbye to his lovers, meets with a very grateful ally, and sets off on next adventure, one which promises to more harrowing than any he's gone on before.

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With the King's Landing arc done, I wanted to ask what everyone thought of it. It was the most complex narrative I've written yet and I am pleased with how it turned out, but your feedback would be appreciated.