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Chapter 2 of Harry's Inferno, in which Harry struggles to come to terms with the reality of his situation, Koriand'r tries to help him as best they can, they manage to stumble upon someone who claims to be able to help them and embark on their new journey together, growing even closer than before.

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I wouldn't normally ask this, but if you notice anything off in this, please let met know. I developed a throat infection at the start of the week and wrote this while quite fevered. I'm feeling better now and I edited it, of course, but still...

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Durdens Wrath

One correction, Harry saidnhe studied Geometry, when he should have said Geography.

Peter K

The only thing I saw was "Ron's pop could fall out of his head", which I think might have been meant to be "Ron's eyes would pop out of his head"? Unless that's a Britishism I'm unfamiliar with

Grant Blair

Great chapter, as per your request I noticed a couple possible inaccuracies shown below “I studied geometry a little in primary school, though I haven’t in quite a while, but I do vaguely remember that.” Should of been geography instead of geometry I imagine “I love all my money in my other planet,” Harry replied, and he winced. I believe this was supposed be left not love

Elias

Interesting, I wonder what the pairs reaction will be to a boy scout like superman. Personally I am looking forward to him meeting green lantern

Kasikan

Decent chapter, but him being that open with Constantine of all people felt way off. He was always closed off to people and Constantine looks like a cross between a used car salesman, an ambulance chasing attorney and a drug dealer in a back alley. That's the last person on Earth you'd ever confide anything with. He's just far too shady. Not to mention he'd probably try to trick them into selling their souls so he could close a case for booze money.

Cody

Love the chapter and I cannot wait for the next one. Also Harry and Starfire make a cute couple.

TheWateringWizard

Love this story!! Harry and Starfire are a great couple, love them. Looking forward the next chapter and them meeting Batman. Maybe some shenanigans in Gotham too?

yan boul

What about the healing powers that Harry seems to have, maybe help Barbara or her too soon?

TheWateringWizard

He could indeed help her! But I don’t know enough about the DC timeline to know when Joker attacks her

yan boul

I don't know the only thing I know that after her injury she started to call it oracle and Batman talks about it in this chapter

Erinnyes

Sexy and fun, I love their relationship!

Brian Jordan

Besides plot necessity, Constantine is the first person Harry's been able to get any information from in years and right now he is desperately in need of any information he can get. Also, while John C is always to be treated with great care, he's not overly prone to selling people out for beer. (Bourbon maybe....)

G

Harry said he can change himself invisible like a horse from his home world. Idr the name of the horse but it’s only invisible if you haven’t seen death so a villain probably would see him if he uses it. But there is an animal that can turn invisible I don’t remember its name either but I know they use its fur to make invisible cloaks.

Hooli4ss

Hopefully we get a suprise pregnancy later on. After they make a place for themselves on this Earth. Imagine a mini orange skinned Harry walking around .