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Chapter 13 of Stumbling on Something Good, in which Harry and Tonks finally get to test out Elfywnn's potion on Chiara, but when Snape acts as his usual charming self, they're forced to improvise and ultimately ask Dobby for help in finding another way into the Chamber, leading to the discovery of a very special room and then a very very good night for the couple and their werewolf friend.

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TheWateringWizard

Malfoy’s little rant at the start of the chapter was pretty hilarious and pitiful too… They finally fucked Chiara!! I’ve been waiting for this for quite a few updates now. Loved it!

Brian Jordan

Long comment warning. Malfoy and his fellow Slytherins grousing about Harry was amusing but sad. I noted a strong quantity of sour grapes in their grievances. For example, since Pansy is so convinced that losing to Ron at chess proves Hermione’s lack of mental ability, does that mean she has beaten Ron on other occasions? (I admit I would enjoy hearing about such a game. Perhaps it could be minor running gag moving forward?) Also, should you ever feel the need for a side story, what would happen if certain entities paid attention when Draco said ‘I’d give anything to take Potter down a peg or two, really show him his place,’ and one decided to introduce him/herself? I have confidence it would be… enlightening. [A being from High School DxD is optional. There are so many other sources to consider.] The question is not why Horace Slughorn is asking Harry about his scar. The question is will Harry mention it to Professor Dumbledore while working out his reply? Honestly, I don’t blame Snape for escorting them down to the Chamber of Secrets. Not saying he couldn’t have done a more diplomatic job but this is Snape. It was inevitable the Hogwarts teachers would take measures to be sure their students were not placed at risk. I did enjoy how Harry reminded Prof. Snape that he needed to consider his words when dealing with Myrtle. Not surprised at the last, extended scene in the Chamber. I will be curious about what Chiara tells Dumbledore after the night is over. (What, you think she won’t say anything? You think Dumbledore, who has to be convinced this will not come back to harm the school and its students, will accept that? And that assumes they don’t oversleep.) “Just then, all he (Harry) did know was that he was happier than he’d ever been in his life, and he just hoped dearly that he’d get to stay that way going forward.” For those thinking the story was nearly over, consider this the cape waved in front the already irritated bull. Regardless, please, may we have some more?