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Chapter 19 of Stumbling on Something Good, in which Harry and the others return home from Hogwarts, the year having ended, and have a number of awkward conversations while Slughorn receives news that pushes him to plot against Fudge, something he discusses with Dumbledore while the two explore a long forgotten cave.

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Cody

Excellent chapter :)

Brian Jordan

And the repercussions of the werewolf attack continue. I was not clear on who met Hestia at the train station. It might have been mentioned and I just missed it but my curiosity is now involved if you are inclined to explain. The Granger's reactions were quite reasonable under the circumstances and I wish Prof. Dumbledore luck calming them down. Also large quantities of headache medicines. I also very much appreciated Andromeda's reactions and what she told Dora about why she is not and never will be like her late, unlamented aunt. Sometimes you just need to hear it from someone who's known you all you life to believe it. I look forward to the next episode.

Brian Jordan

Sorry, just rereading this chapter and had two more questions: First, can anyone offer you an edited version for possible reposting? There are multiple missing words and typos screaming at me for relief. Second, and more story oriented, what happens when a male ingests the potion? So far, it's only been used on women and, as some might have noticed, there are some differences between the two genders.

Erinnyes

Great chapter!