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Chapter 17 of Helping Hands, in which Harry, Luna, and the others finally venture into the shadow-cursed lands, finding the resistance to Thorm in the process, and working out a plan to deal with their great foe and, hopefully, find something they can use to save the others from their tadpoles.

A/N: A fair few of you have, over the past few months, expressed that this story seems to have gotten too bogged down in this current world and I wanted to address that. When I first decided to add the multiversal stuff to Witchcraft and Devilry, there were a lot of women from different universes that I considered adding to it. I eventually cut almost all of them, realizing that the story would become a bloated, unwritable mess if I went that far, and so I conceived of Helping Hands as a way to get to all of them.

This was supposed to be a sort of anthology series, where Harry, Luna, and Ciri would go into a world, find an attractive woman, seduce her, bring shenanigans, and then leave, taking her back with them. My original idea when they went to Planetos was for them to save Daenerys and then immediately get out of there, leaving the world to rot. I had had this idea ever since I watched season 8 of Game of Thrones, which I hated with such a fiery passion that it was actually what got me back into writing fanfiction. As I was writing that part, though, I found myself wanting to have them do more in that world, and that turned what would have been a one or two chapter thing, into a multi-chapter arc.

This then, in turn, led to the current situation with Baldur's Gate. I'm still enjoying this story, because I love BG3 and having them enter into that quagmire and try to fix it has been fun. If you are enjoying it as well, I'm very happy about that, but I understand that a lot of you aren't, and in all honesty, with how the story has progressed, I think it would be silly to try to steer it back to what I originally envisioned for it, so I've made a decision.

I will be finishing this arc outright, and I will use it to wrap up Helping Hands, but that won't be end for this concept. I plan to essentially reboot the story when it's done, writing something new that is similar in concept yet not weighed down by everything that's happened, and that story will stick to my original vision for it. Women who would have suffered an unfortunate ending in their story (or otherwise just suffer a lot) will be saved, seduced, and whisked away to an island paradise to live in peace and bliss. I really like that idea and it's just such a fantastic vehicle for letting me explore characters that I would otherwise do nothing at all with, or just use in one-shots.

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Comments

Smithz

Shame this is ending, I really liked how detailed each world was! I don’t think its been dragging on at all!

MultiverseCosms

Likewise. Suppose long as we get Ciri back for the world hopping, it's cool.

Alexander Schrammen

Personally I like the story, but I am too unfamiliar with BG3 to enjoy it. I think that it would be great to read Alternatives which take place after Planetos, since rewriting the entire start of a Harry/Luna/Ciri story time and again would be quite tedious.

micah fortman

The story is great and I kinda dont need the smut. Your a good author and while I love your erotica this one has evolved away from the need. Write what you want man.

thuggins

Honestly I can feel both sides of this; I felt the BG arc dragging along a little too much for what this story had been before it (even considering the longer Planetos arc - that was broken up enough between kingdoms/parts of Planetos that it didn't drag) but the muse goes where it goes and sometimes that's not toward a bite-sized adventure.

thuggins

I look forward a lot to the 'reboot' of the island paradise concept. So many women in so many universes to visit. Even if you use Ciri as a vehicle again - she's good for that.

Josh Robbins

I love this story, could you do one like this and be indepth and then the one you were talking about where its just one shots of women getting saved?

Elias

i do like this story but the think the drawn out feeling comes from the fact that this arc seems to be far longer and have more going on then many of the other realm jumps so it messes with the pacing

Cody

I have enjoyed reading this story and while sad it is ending I look forward to reading the reboot of course it sounds like it will be quite amazing

Primordial Vortex

The thing is, I like the idea of this story. And I actually really enjoy the current arc. Where I feel the story stumbled is the fact that there's little continuity. The first girls they 'rescued' were Elsa and Anna if memory serves, and neither of them have been given any focus for quite a while. Ciri is the only companion who actually feels like a companion. The other girls just feel like "flavor of the week." Find em, fuck em, forget about em. THAT'S the part I think that the story is failing on. It feels less like one narrative and more like three or four stories in a trench coat. You easily could have timeskipped after the frozen chapters and included the two in the GoT arc, and then in the BG3 arc. Ice sorceress elsa? Would fit perfectly. As for Dany? Again, timeskip a bit, have her be Ciri's student. Or something like that. Bigger dragons. They could then take part in the story. As it is, they just constantly get left behind and are therefore unimportant to the plot.

Durdens Wrath

I actually love this story as is.

Durdens Wrath

If you do a "reboot", could you just start after the Elsa arc? Redoing everything would be awful.

Durdens Wrath

Also, I was willing to put up with a lot to see Harry do Karlach

Big Meem

I personally could read an entire fic about BG3. Unfortunately it seems not many other people seem to feel the same :(

Voivode_Writer

Now that I know I can end the story here, I can focus completely on the BG3 arc, and all the women, and bring it to an ending I would have decided against if I had to return Harry, Luna, and Ciri to their world and send them to the next one. There will be Karlach action, I promise.

Voivode_Writer

I'm not going to rewrite the story. I'm going to take the concept and work in a different direction. There will be no rehashing.

Durdens Wrath

Oh Ive not had any complaints at all. Please do consider limiting the reboot to like right after the Elsa arc.

Mandragoran

I loved the story up until they got to BG3. I just have absolutely 0 knowledge of that universe so it’s been really hard for me to get into it. That being said, if writing it makes you happy, I say go for it, because I want you to keep writing forever and it’s still an enjoyable story even when I don’t know what the heck’s going on

Erinnyes

I admit I’m sorry to see this come to a close, even if this arc did feel weirdly long compared to previous ones. That said, I’m very much looking forward to the reboot, and will eagerly read it when it launches!