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Chapter 33 of Delightful Duty, in which Jon and Rhaenyra continue to fill Daemon and Laena in on much of what they know, the other couple has a very frank discussion in private, Viserys finally legitimizes Jon and announces the upcoming wedding, and Daemon makes a proposal to his niece while Otto and his brother plot against them all.

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KrimzonHawka

Interesting possibilities being brought up but that last idea feels like it could be a bit too much and prone to a lot of abuse, even if only reserved for the Dothrakhi (also wiping out the adult male population feels a bit extreme). Given Dany's ability in the original timeline to subvert the Dothrakhi's strength based culture it also seems unnecessary and if you do follow through with it I hope you just keep it to targeted to a few leaders as it shouldn't be hard to subvert the rest afterwards (plus I'm sure Daemon would love to run his own Khalessar....). Anyway, all I would like to request is that it isn't abused or over leveraged, both for keeping the story from just solving everything through magic and because it doesn't feel like something even at their most ruthless Jon and Rhaenyra would rely upon 😅

Weaver145

I hope that Jon and Rhaenyra very aggressively refute any rumors on Laenors death and the children's bastardry if the Greens take that road.

zasha ktrystei

They are officially engaged 💃🕺🥳🎉. Re the last idea 💡 I don't mind admitting im uncomfortable with it. I would like a 1000 better if he went & brought some slaves & free them for the work. But the Dothrakhi are some of the worst as people but individually 😒 they are some that are ok.

NovaSoulless

Not to mention I hope Laena has a viseral reaction to those rumors and feeds people to Vhagar for daring so say those thing. Ugh fucking Hightowers. I swear they need to start checking for poisons and assassins and do a sort of death pact that if one of them gets got by that means they just fly over and burn the Hightower to the fucking ground.

Mandragoran

Interesting chapter. More of a filler chapter getting people’s reactions over Dorne, but still nice. Looking forward to more!

Gary Brown

Great to see them engaged now on to the wedding. Just a suggestion for the wedding attire if the wedding is held before the Old Gods then Jon can wear the traditional Northern Kilt in the colors of House Targaryen of course. As for the last idea with the Dothraki I feel using magic such as that is overkill and unnecessary since Daemon has shown he has the ability to turn untrained people into a true armed force so he should use his charisma to draw men will to join him for a chance at glory, riches from the dothraki, and if Rhaenyra can convince the city of Pentos land for their people which could aid in the elimination of slavery from Pentos.

Clephne

loved it, I laughed aloud when Rhaenyra compared herself to Alicent, pure genius

Ashok Dodaballapur

After the wedding will there be a possible time jump?

Emily Gersky

Another wonderful chapter! I can’t wait to read more! I’ve been thinking of ways for Jon to prove his foreknowledge, especially as they have changed so much. One piece of information that I was thinking of, Baela’s egg hatches to Moondancer. Rhaena’s first egg eventually hatched, but the dragon was weak, deformed, and survived for only a few hours—he could share that info. He should also know about Morning the dragon that does hatch for Rhaena. He could tell them that info and then find Mornings egg, it would be awesome if her egg hatched earlier so Rhaena and Baela could grow u flying together