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Chapter 4 of Alone No Longer, in which Jon continues to reel from everything he learned and informs his family that he intends to leave, much to their distress, while Rhaenys and Oberyn make their way to the Wall and Viserys and Daenerys get apparently saved by Illyrio.

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John M Pogue

Another amazing chapter, my friend, well done. Can't wait for Rhae and Jon to meet and talk to Aemon. Damn, Dany was so close to meeting the others. Illyrio and Varys are clever, using Melisandre's presence with Stannis as a way to explain her dreams and keep both of them contained. I wonder who else Shiera has working for her both in Westeros and Essos.

Victor

only thing i dont like about this is all the lesbians, but i guess thats a personal preference

KrimzonHawka

Quick question but will you be adopting any of the new lore reflections from the Mad King play? I know it's semi-canon and a lot of the details were compacted and dramatized for the play but there were some interesting things like Lyanna being a skinchanger and having Wolf Dreams, obviously you don't need to do a one for one adaptation and you should modify the details to best fit your story (wouldn't mind Elia being Lyanna's lover as well with Rhaegar or something like that for example instead of Ashara etc.) but it would be cool to see some nods to it if they can be incorporated, especially the trauma and effects of Summerhall. Thanks if you can manage to include it 👍

Winter

What was his actual targ name i keep forgetting

Winter

Gotchu i was wondering but basically he is true born and is in line for the throne oberyn obviously will want him to marry rhaenys to satisfy dorne lol but im marrying shiera too and dany all Valyrian

DarkLightKage

Awesome as always, love this story