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Author's Note:

In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.

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Captaindrake123

Oh crap, they just can't catch a break can they?

BubblyGhost

“What do I need to do? Get stabbed through the heart?” Damnit Rob, you know better than to think shit like that!

Amelgar

That moment when you realise... the boss music... hasn't... stopped!

Kerrus Magrus

That moment when you realize the infection is a computer virus. Damn.

Copernicus

Yey another fighting chapter... (I know people like it, however i do enjoy the world exploring part) I wonder if we will see the Elven Monarch and his minions coming eventually ? Would he have the gall to round up the survivors to put them into a trial ?

tibbish

The fight was good, as was his beatdown of the levelling addiction, but I'm getting a little worried you're ramping up the threat level too fast. Mist authors paint themselves into a corner that way and have to start layering on the plot armor and such. Hopefully you vgot something to dodge outta that trap and I'm worried over nothing

H B

fully agree with tibbish here. be mindful of no need 2 keep one upping the villians, youll defiantly put yourself in a corner

kamikazepotato

Without going into too much detail, I'll say that endless escalation is not going to be an issue with this story. The power scaling of everything in the world was predetermined a long time ago.

kamikazepotato

The plot structure of this arc (long buildup to a major siege) necessitated a lot of chapters without combat, and then a lot with combat. Usually it will be a bit more balanced.

bob barker

“Prepare yourself, Fallen Lord,” Keira said with glee. “I’ll give you a death worthy of the stories they’ll sing of me!” [Piercing Butthole Omnislash]!