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Chapter 52 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-06-25 04:07:01
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Author's Note:

In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.

Comments

Ziggy

I can't pinpoint exactly why, but I like the interaction this chapter. New perspective and chat with someone not acting totally mercantile, maybe? "a little overly excited to talk with someone who was treating me normal." - I might be wrong and it's a bit pedantic, but I think "normally" is correct. Given I could be wrong and Rob's speech doesn't have to be perfect, just wanted to point it out. The bit with Keira falling to her knees and then lifting Orn'tol up was a tad difficult to visualize, but that could just be me.

Richard McCain

I love his interactions with Diplomacy. Especially when they're both surprised or flustered.

Austin Boone

Mm that's that good stuff. -- Thanks for writing!

Copernicus

Nothing like allowing your little sister to have 7 cups of magical caffeine at once, that is bound to end well. Sarcasm.

Catra

Ooo I like this chapter And I am SOOO looking forward to Dragon Girl meeting the Elves God I can't wait for the next chapter :( 2 or 3 days :( :( :(

tibbish
>>62517042

Magical Caffeine is fiiiiiiine. Its the Magical MEGACOKE you gotta watch out for. Those kids get hooked on it faast!