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Chapter 66 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-08-12 04:01:21
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Author's Note:

In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.

Comments

Catra

Amazing chapter

Ziggy

Your prose is pretty impressive. You continue to use turns of phrase and uncommon words that most authors would make seem clumsy or out of place. While bland prose like Sanderson's can be great for easy reading, I tend to prefer when it's more clever.

Nathan Linder

“Try as many times as you like,” Alessia declared. “When the sum of your failures have reached their apex, and I continue to stand tall and proud, you’ll find that your efforts will have amounted to nothing. Your existence will have amounted to nothing. A mere pawn of a Dungeon whose only worth lies in the EXP you’ll grant our allies.” Dang. And here I thought Rob was the pyromaniac.

kamikazepotato
>>65605481

I try to jazz up the prose and keep it interesting, so it's good to hear it's working for people. You can never tell if it will until you get feedback.

Ziggy
>>65605481

Let's put aside all that impressiveness that's so readily apparent for a moment. You saw your chance to describe the fire as being hot on their heels, and you went for it. That's the dad-level sort of elbow ribbing I can get behind.

Corwin Amber

Just wanted to thank you for a very entertaining story. I actually started reading it a couple days ago due to Ralts Bloodthorne's (author of First Contact) recommendation.

Pete
>>65605481

I like how the puns go unheralded. Makes finding them even more of a treat!

Ziggy
>>65605481

The wordplay the past two chapters in particular has been on fire.

Ariez Weatherford

Still waiting for keira to do the sword on the ground game again, but this time rob just slowly hitches it up, letting himself heal after every pull xD *raises it an inch, shoulders dislocate, waits for them to heal...another inch..."

FIT4MTB

With the talk of leveling being potentially sweeter and burning down the entire place (against reason), I’m surprised leveling high changing to moderate isn’t in Rob’s updates at the end - even if he hasn’t noticed yet.