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Author's Note:

In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, Chapters 1 through 38 have been removed. This post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.

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Trevor Smith

Looking forward to how the rest of the survivors are caring after the delve. And how all of them are getting flattened by one very VERY pissed off elder :)

Nathan Linder

Might be misremebering how the exp share works, but wouldn't Urian just be able to invite Rob into his party and still reap the benefits?

Catra

Oo a two part? Excited

kamikazepotato

Honestly, in my mind he's always had to be Party 'Leader' for it to work. Which I might never have codified now that I think about it. If there's something in the text that contradicts this, let me know - even the author forgets minor details after 300k words.

Amelgar

Zamira's mum is pretty awesome

Austin Boone

"...Bunch of flame-touched souls in the Deserters, apparently.” well mostly just the one, really. XD Boy goes through crates of firebombs like they're boxes of cinnamon toast crunch!

Jason Hornbuckle

“But that would be a lie so blatant that it would burn my lips to speak." "Words are traitorous fiends, and the fewer chances I give them to ruin my good standing, the better.” I think you are over-writing this a bit. These characters do not generally talk like this.

Nathan Linder

Went back and checked when it got introduced and it needing to be on the leader wasn't mentioned, but don't remember it ever being explicitly stated as being usable with anyone. Chapter 24 if you decide you want to just add that bit in for the official publication.

DuskDeadman

Everyone has a flair for the dramatic if the moment comes man. And our dear dragon 100% talks like that, and our future berserker fan in the making has talked like that.

Spriggs james

You have to remember a good portion of the dialogue is with Rob, people’s mannerisms and speech change based on who they are talking to and may reflect more or less of their own personality depending on the others Rob seems quite flippant to anyone who does not share his casual point of view as an example.