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Nathan Linder

Time for Rob to earn that blightkiller title it looks like.

Catra

Amazing chapter

Craxuan

I would say that this might be how Rob's going to get rid of a certain dragon, but without knowing the exact power level of this Blight it might amount to exactly nada. Also I have a feeling Rob is going to turn into Guts very soon.

Craxuan

I mean as in letting in the Blight's power and using it to fight the Dragon Queen, like how Guts letting himself be consumed by the armor to gain power to fight impossible monstrosities.

Mason Sudul

Holy fuck i havent had a book monster evoke that kind of visceral reaction i think ever nice job author

kamikazepotato

Thanks for letting me know! That's what I was going for. When I write horror-esque monsters, I try to make sure they hit different.

Arcane Hermit

Honestly, if that happened. One can make a Guts blursed with Griffith comparison. Except, it's a Hellhound out of taint, being able to revile in long integrated/assimilated grudges. And a likely impending horror over advanced corruption? Or. "Dark Rob, the Tainted Prince of Joy"

Aidan Geverdt

Bleh, I hate romantic tension. Rob needs to confess to Keira already. And I really hope Zamira finds someone else to crush on instead of being dragged back into a situation by Rob that’s she’s already uncomfortable with. On another note, did Duran just die? I can’t believe it. Randor and Lycia was sad too. Good chapter.

Joe

I support the romance theme. Hard to continue reading. Let Rob / Keira come together and find someone for Zamora so we can concentrate on the story again

Madaremius

wait a moment cuz i think you missed something that is blight sooo i think you made error with something 2 Attunements: Take 100% less damage when Attuning to a Locus of Power. Can sense nearby Corruption. nearby Corruption!!!!!! how the fuck did he MISS a BLIGHT that is not just corruption part that IS Corruption

Jon

Jesus effing Christ...can't these people ever catch a break?

Catra

Consider: Keira likes and dates them *both* This message brought to you by poly gang Do it author 🥺

Ariez Weatherford

it says "raised his arms", are we assuming that regrowing his arm fixed it??

M

Well, "nearby" can mean a lot. 5m? 10m? a hundred meters? even a kilometre wouldn't have triggered, considering the blight area is likely dozens of kilometers away.

Catra

Not a harem, or gross. Polyamory is perfectly fine. It doesn't have to be but it'd be cool to see and for poor Zamira to not get hurt

Joe

Polyamory is just like harem. Nothing but an excuse for the weak

kamikazepotato

Let's keep it civil, please. Diana has already stated she's part of the poly gang (which I assume means she engages in it herself), so your comment could be interpreted as an insult.

Aidan Geverdt

While I don’t agree with you, it was too far to call it gross so I apologize for that. On the Zamira note, It’s impossible to go through life and not get hurt and opening a relationship to her where you don’t feel any potential romantic attraction (in robs case) is irresponsible and worse than them hurting for a bit and moving on.

Madaremius

when i read it i felt like i was given description of a ludwig the acursed look a like but with shark head's instead of horse head also got his bullshit breath/puke attack.... also good work cuz last time i seen good old ludie he was beating my ass like a drum and made me worry about my IRL sounds at night so got terror part just right.

Madaremius

do not put dark ideas in to potato's head...the ones all ready ther dont need company

Captaindrake123

If Keira is so confused about regular rock paper scissors, I would love to see how she'd react to the spock edition.

Catra

Poly doesn't mean harem, that's a specific kind of thing which is.. not great. Also Keira being with both rob and Zamira doesn't mean Zamira is also with Rob

Aidan Geverdt

Yeah I know the difference. I can’t say That I agree with either harems or poly. To me personally a relationship is a close bond with 2 people. And if I found out the person I had that kind of bond with also had a bond like that with another person it would wreck me. I don’t think it’s possible to be in a romantic relationship with 2 people and love them both equally. I just can’t comprehend it. And I get that not everyone is like that, but I personally wouldn’t be able to enjoy a story if the main character, the person I’m supposed to relate to, was in a relationship like that.

Catra

Obviously a poly relationship requires the consent of all parties, if you don't want one you ofc don't have to have one and itd be cheating if your partner did It's not for everyone, and that's okay. Everyone's relationships are different

Joe

I personal want a good fantasy story, maybe with some romantic, but definitely nothing that complicates the story unnecessary. The majority of people prefer monogamous relationship and this is not the place to implement sexual experiments. It’s a fantasy story

Catra

Gotta say it's pretty unimaginative to say fantasy can only have "traditional" human relationships They're not even human, they're elves! Why should their relationship customs be the same as ours? Why is anything other than that "complicated"?

Aidan Geverdt

Because it is complicated. And I agree with you when you say fantasy shouldn’t only have traditional relationships. I just think that’s something that should be known and in the description or whatever before you read. Nothings worse than dedicating a ton of time to a story just to find out 3 books in that the relationship dynamics aren’t what you thought they were. It can be a dealbreaker.

Catra

Why do they have to be what you thought they'd be, and why can one only think "traditional", why doesn't that need "warnings" but anything else does? On chapter 1 did anyone think or expect the story to go the way it has, cus I sure doubt it.

Aidan Geverdt

Because some things people have strong opinions on. Obviously I don’t want to know exactly how the story is going to unfold, but if the story was full of harems or rape and non traditional romances for the main character, I would want that info to be available for me to find because those are things that can affect peoples enjoyment of the story. Everyones values and opinions are different and you can’t just talk someone into agreeing with you all the time. Anyways this discussion has gone on for a while and has kind of gone off the rails so lets end it here.