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Catra

Amazing chapter! Lmao that ending. Fuck you lothren indeed. Can't wait for the next chapter, linear time sucks

Not N. Octopus

okay the system is starting to get downright sassy at this point

Nathan Linder

Ah, Rob's just got an eldritch horror for a soul. nbd. Also confirmed that Diplomacy has a soul, so that's likely good news on that whole getting a body for them deal.

Craxuan

Yeah, that went about as good as I expected.

Austin Boone

God damn I can only imagine what playing D&D with you would be like. Guess it's back counting down the days until the next chapter...

Ziggy

Probably not a good thing I don't immediately disagree with Keira commiting what are essentially war crimes on recently captured prisoners.

Ziggy

Small edit. "That wasn’t the case when a person with Vitality buffs – specifically, Rob’s Vitality buffs." I think you forgot a part of this sentence or it got away from you. As is, the phrasing of "when a person with vitality buffs" doesn't complete and is left hanging.

Glen Shepard

LOL I love how this chapter ends

Catra

Ehh they'll be fineeee, they'll grow back. If they behave

NeWorlDark

Actually assassins and spies are generally don't get honorable treatment, she was actually more merciful for not just killing them on sight.

Lictor Magnus

I’m not sure why but the formatting is was off on this chapter and the last chapter in the patreon app. None of the paragraph spacing is there so it’s just a giant wall of text. It’s totally fine when it look at it using my web browser instead.

CMDR Dantae

Well this was not how I expected this chapter to go, but I'm all for it. Welcome to grey morality Keira, don't forget your justifications and hidden weapons. Damn, that ending though, that was perfect...

CMDR Dantae

It's fine for me. Not sure whats causing it for ya. Maybe try a different browser app.

Lictor Magnus

Is it fine for you in the patreon app or your browser? Browser works just fine for me too.

Lictor Magnus

Hmm, I’m on iOS. Every other story is fine, it’s just this one that’s doing it and only since that last chapter. Oh well, I’ll just read this story on my browser in the meantime.

Ben Courquin

Brilliant ending on this one, genuinely couldn't be better! Personally I think that keiras actions in this case are completely justified, on earth this would be fitting but would make future negotiations very difficult whereas in Eltra (don't think I'm spelling that right) it makes moving forward from their betrayal possible and should actually see the negotiations progress smoother. Thanks for another brilliant installment wordsmith!

Ziggy

Also, when the healer starts speaking to Keira, she refers to them as "him." Then Zamira and Keira both appear to refer to the same healer as "her."