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Author's Note: In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, this chapter has been removed. The post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.

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Kyle Miller

Great chapter, with their speed they should be able to get back pretty fast then its just a matter of beating up *another* Leader. If things go to plan at least, and we know how that goes.

Austin Boone

I think we all agree with Sylpeiros' last statement, great chapter as always!

Catra

Absolutely amazing chapter

Raphael Mort

I think I find the contrast between Sylpeiros and the Stonewarden interesting. Both of them are very "the ends justify the means", but the Stonewarden carries an air of superiority because of it. Kinda paladiny in nature, "I do this because it is just", whereas Sylpeiros comes across more as "I will do this because I have no other choice/I cannot overcome my own emotions, even if I know they're horribly biased." That means that when you meet the two, the Stonewarden gives off better vibes than Sylpeiros, but they're built on that air of superiority, meaning that sustained contact will reinforce the impression of Sylpeiros being an asshole you can rely on to do the things he says he'll do, while you quickly lose all trust in the Stonewarden.

Ronin316

Stonewarden Grant whispered to Rob, “I wish you could have stopped me.” Almost as if he is following divine orders instead of his own will. This aligns with Alessia mentioning “glaring discrepancies” with Grant’s usual competent planning. Grant is reluctantly following orders from the gods, and must put on appearances of gleeful compliance.

CMDR Dantae

Brilliant chapter! I'm really enjoying how you're exploring the character of Sylpeiros and Grant. The theme of power affecting Elatran leaders is a fascinating one. Though I have to admit, for all that human leadership benefited from not putting the strongest combat classes in charge, these leaders seem like genuinely good people, even Ragnavi as evil as she is at least has the excuse of losing everything she cared about, and her descent into madness and depravity is fascinating as much as it is infuriating. I'll look forward to more.