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Author's Note: In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, this chapter has been removed. The post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.

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Catra

Amazing chapter

M

Man this is getting better and better :)

ciopo

mmmm, the scene is a bit too jarring. Like, Lucio tells the others there are some blight-implanted people .. queueing up? he can pinpoint more or less how far they are and so give a fairly precise accountment of when they will get first in line... and in all that not one of the others glance at the people in the queue to gauge who they will have to deal with?? it's a bit stretchy on the suspension of disbelief

kamikazepotato

Yeah, that's fair. We're considering revising this chapter, although continuing on with the normal schedule is higher up on our priorities. Thanks for the feedback!