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Just wanted to lay out some thoughts about my writing format and hopefully get some feedback.

Would appreciate a read! TLDR at the bottom if it's too much: This latest chapter of Aphrodite's Charm(Coming this evening) wasn’t as long as I thought it be, but still ~15k words. Hopefully forgivable considering how late it was. That wasn’t for a lack of effort or time invested, but a silly conflict of interest on my part.

So, here’s the thing. When I first started FF(and writing in general) I didn’t write pure smut. But when I started Patreon, my only works were King of the World, Love and Lust, and Horny Witches, which are all ‘smut’ fics. Smut as in; porn as the primary focus, not too serious, and importantly, I try for a ‘lemon’(sex scene) in every chapter.

Now that I’ve built my Patreon around that, I’ve found myself writing with the notion that at least one smut scene is required per chapter. Or at least feeling some pressure to include it, even if it might rush the plot. But sometimes, as with Aphrodite’s Charm or Hogwarts Ledger, I enjoy a little build up. This combination has resulted in some crazy circumstances, especially recently, where I end up a week late but post a ridiculously long chapter. (27k word Daphne Chapter in HW)

In the case of Aphrodite’s Charm, I had a very clear roadmap of that story from the beginning, but when I started Ch 4, I quickly became conflicted on whether that was going to be the chapter with Aphrodite’s scene or not. Considering the ending of Ch 3 and the general flow of that story, I felt it would’ve been a very abrupt choice to jump straight into a sex scene in Ch 4. So that left me in limbo, two chapters or one that would end up like 30k words and would have to be delayed even more than it already was?

I don’t know if you guys care one way or another, however, I’ve come to realize that this debate I’ve been having has been caused a few minor issues internally. Recently, it’s left me feeling with a few of my chapters that they were either way too long, or rushing a character’s smut scene I probably would’ve preferred building up longer. (If you read L&L, Robin’s last chapter) And as a result of the massive length of some of these, I have stories I genuinely DO want to write for, that I haven’t updated in months.

TLDR; Do you guys want smut in every chapter? Would you be okay with plot/character development focused chapters if you enjoyed them? And I suppose, would you be okay with shorter chapters if it meant faster updates? (Assuming there was no loss of word count or content.)

Now, I don’t want to imply with this post that I’m going to be taking the smut out of HW or my other works. Most of my content is designed to be smut stories, with very little plot at all. But, I’d love to improve my work where I can.

Any feedback or thoughts you have to give would be greatly appreciated! Aphrodite’s Charm ch 4 is getting cleaned up and edited but should be up this evening!

Comments

Mr. YouthfulEntrepreneur

I'm done with anything! Smut in every update? Sure. Chapters on plot/character development? Absolutely! Short chapters - faster updates? Heck yea. So long as we continue to get your great work feel free to do whatever is easier/ helpful for you.

J T

I think some plot to build up the connection between the characters would help. It would also help move the story along in a natural way. Example being how Narcissa helped Harry avoid the tournament. That created a bond between them and fleshed out what type of person she was while also moving the plot along in the direction that won the poll.

Jon Beast

Honestly it is fine if you do not want to put smut in every chapter. You do not need to do that, I have read smut stories before where there was a break between or a few to push the focus, which was the plot. If this is meant to be porn with plot then flush out the narrative XD. You are a great writer and your work reflects that. Smut or not, I am good with either. If you have a road map and want to flesh out the plot I say do it. We will read it just as we would any of your other posts XD.

KirbyLover

Getting plot focused chapters are fine, even welcome depending on what they focus on. A chapter focused on the more non-sexual aspects of the romances? Very neat, very welcome and something I look forward to in other fics. But if it’s a chapter focused on like… building up some antagonist or smthn like world building? No as cool. Basically, as long as the plot focused parts are still centered around the characters I’m reading the smut of, that’s cool and awesome. Granted I can’t really speak for your non HP fics cause I don’t read those. As for chapter length, it depends. With as many series as you have I’m worried about that lower word count per chapter thing because of how it would affect things. The fics of yours I read update like…. Once every other month. Which I don’t really have an issue with because each chapter has a lot of content. But if it switched to like monthly updates, but the chapters were only a quarter of what they used to be? I’d prefer just the slower uploads with longer chapters. Short chapters with infrequent updates result in people losing the plot and it being harder to keep people engaged, because a new chapter comes out and people go “Wait, what’s happening right now?” And lose track of things. Do keep in mind this is coming from someone who solely reads your HP stuff

GodsShadow

Thanks for the thoughts! I don't have any current plans to dedicate entire chapters to antagonists (Tbh my works don't even have antagonists) It would either be the protag or the harem. Regarding length, I appreciate the feedback. If I ever decide to go for shorter chapters, it would ideally be the same amount of content long-term, just split up. So if I had done, lets say, one 20k word every other month, it'd be like two 10k chapters monthly. Most of my chapters are pretty massive in comparison to the norm, so I don't think that it would lose too much context wise if I went as far as to cut them in half. (Though that was just an example.)

Rattles

I would be ok with you writing chapters that focus on character interaction and other aspects rather just smut every time, as well as shorter chapters. Could make those more explicit chapters hit different when there is more "meat on the bone" so to speak. Ultimately you do what think would work best and what you would enjoy writing

Erinnyes

What Kirby said. 😁

Vinccool96

I’m here for the goofiness, brother. Smut or not, I’m entertained and I like it. Also, something really important: it’s your stories. Write them how you want. If you don’t, you might burn out and want to quit writing them. You’re writing for yourself and happen to share it with us.

MRMV90

I don't really care, but not in a bad way, as long as the characters and scenes develop, I'm fine, as long as you keep up with the stories, haha.

Elias

I think at least in regards to AC I don't mind the build up, in chapter 3 and previous chapters you manage to move the story along while including the smut and introduce future story threads. For something like King of The World or Love and lust the smut is kind of a big part of both so smut every chapter or so doesn't feel like it come out of nowhere(for me at least). In the end it mainly comes down to how you right the character, Percy isn't written like a mega hornhog and Aphrodite is at this point starting to shift in how she thinks a bit, so if one or several chapters in a row don't have smut and focuses more on story it still works without feeling as if something is missing. With all that being said your writing is excellent and if you did decide to cut out the smut for a while and do plot focus for your stories in general or just for AC I would be perfectly happy either way.

jackice

I'm fine with whatever, build let's you create story and suspense (extra)

Zeilke

I feel like it depends on the chapter and what it's going for.

Jordisk

Smut is a fun thing, but I don't read your stories to jack off. I read your stories because I like your writing. Stories that include or have the possibility of smut have a different feel than other stories, because the author is not afraid of having the characters be casually intimate even if it isn't actual sex; stories posted otherwise generally don't go further than kissing and sitting on opposite sides of the couch.

Hadrian Scipio

I like both. A chapter or two for story, and one for pure smut. Basically Porn with Plot.

VaticToxic

Keep writing and I'll keep reading. I like your smut stories, but I also genuinely like your not smut writing (I don't get bored reading non smut sections lol). I'd read chapters with no smut, so long as there's interactions and a plan.

Soma

Feel like for some stories (like HW) there could be smut each chapter along with character development. But other stories could have chapters where its just characters dev. And honestly a story like Ledger is begging for character development and slice of life/ecchi, rather than just smut all the time imo

Papa Aeon 7210

I definitely wouldn’t mind build up chapters. I commented this on the Robin chapter of L&L but I definitely thought that could have been a longer build up to them being physical at all, even though they haven’t *technically* had sex yet. I think KOTW had a non-smut chapter and that was good too. One that I really feel would benefit from it is Ledger, since I feel like Harry has a more positive and interesting relationship with his girls in that series, where in HW it’s completely sex based for the most part.

joel miller

im all for build up. i like the porn with a plot but i like a good story more. im a hermione fan so thats what attracted me. so anything else is a bonus.

zorro99

I don’t need smut every update. If you feel it’s impacting the quality of your writing and what you want to do, then it’s better to write what’s more natural for the chapter/story progression.