[Sneak Peak] Ch 0.1 Rewrite of These Tragic Souls and a Sword Reborn in an Intergalactic Space Opera (Patreon)

On a scale from 1 to 10, how chuuni is this? haha

This is my intro to the story, before Shirou awakens in that place with Zelretch.

I would like some feedback or comments.

By the way, I'm not going to delete the previous version; I'm going to make a new post, just like I did with Chapter 3.3 of this fic.

This shall be simultaneously updated and rewritten, and I’ll probably do the same when I’m done with rewriting this fic.