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Hello everyone! I would like to start posting Dev Diaries every other Monday or something to get feedback on some of my plans. As the game is currently in early development it can be hard for my intentions to be clear so I would like to start posting my intentions and hear what you all have to say.

Plans for v0.17 and beyond

There are many concepts being workshopped in my head, both story and mechanical. I want to make Harem Hotel as enjoyable as possible, much more than it currently is. Right now this means increasing the available choices you have at any given moment. So what will this look like?

A Farmable Garden:

As many of you probably know from my v0.16 dev post, I intended to add a farmable garden to hotel, behind the currently accessible Garden area. But this was delayed for many reasons.

A farmable garden would be an active source of income and usable items, which would later unlock into a passive source in Jin's storyline once she takes over.

Maintenance would be required through watering, bug spray, fertilizing, etc. First done by you, then by Jin automatically.

Actively gaining income can be fun to an extent, but when grindy becomes a chore. This is why it will be active in the early game when that money matters more, but passive once the income is negligible.

The garden could include food crops such as potatoes, onions, cabbage, tomatoes, etc. This will save you money, as there are so many mouths to feed.

The garden could include cash crops such as Tinu, Hops, or maybe even an ingredient for Naki.

The garden could include stat crops such as lust beans to increase lust manually, or something that causes an experience multiplier to stat, such as gaining 2 anal points during a single action instead of 1.

Interactive Mobile Phone:

Can provide extra context before and after story events

Characters can send you nudes after unlocking certain stats

Making Sex Completely Optional:

Could unlock a SFW path (not that you would want to)

Allows for a possible SFW version of the game to be released in more markets (for free)

Gives you more choices to play how you want, and skip content you don't want to see.

Expanding the "How are you?" Dialogue:

The "How are you?" dialogue changes as you advance each character's story, but not enough.

Can add context to how a character feels after each event or major action.

It shouldn't be more than a handful of lines for each new response, keeping it to the point.

Should make the characters feel more alive.

Adding Themed Music:

The music options are currently very limited, this is because sound files can bloat the filesize.

But an optional "DLC" could be downloaded if that becomes an issue.

Many story events and locations could benefit from themed music, which would increase immersion.

Does anyone here know how to compose music?

Remakes, Remakes, Remakes:

Many scenes are still in need of improvements, some visually, some through better writing. Android's early content specifically has begun to stick out now that most of the other content has been remade.

My goal is never to remove, but improve. 

Some repeatable sex options, exhibitionism options, and most of the dungeon content could probably be remade. I will need help finding inconsistencies.

Side Character Content:

Side characters like Kate, Vanessa, Ellen, etc are planned to get repeatable content in the hotel. As well as their friends.

The Hot Springs is a place for outsiders to enjoy your hotel, soon you'll be able to enjoy them ;)

Dungeon content is on the table.

More Explore Content:

The "Explore" feature is only 25% - 33% done

More locations will be added when they are ready, current ones will be expanded.

As well as a new "District" with three locations to visit. This district would be in a nearby forest with a cave.

This would allow more perspective to be shown, including with Drows and more rural people.

Eventually all Explore content will be replaced with Tier 2 Explore content, which will allow you to revisit the same places after they have changed.

Holidays:

Holidays provide great opportunities to show off a culture and what they value most.

A calendar system may be added, in which case birthdays may also be mechanically present.

Some Holidays already exist, but they don't always have much significance. That can change.

Some Holidays will be story based, and some will be mechanical (Such Lin's Midlari)

Unification Day - In some ways like an 'Independence Day', but in other ways the complete opposite. This is a day when people dress up like it's the medieval era (When Syl'anar was founded) and recreate the culture "Cowboys vs Indians" style.

Elvish Cultural Holidays - Each culture has their own holidays, such as the Common Elf's Midlari, or the High Elves worship of the moons. These can be expanded upon as well.

A new Main Character:

Yep, that's still coming.

Gallery updates:

Yeah, I'll get to it. Eventually all events will be available.

And that's all for now! Please let me know what you think. Suggestions are always helpful as well :)

All of this is only possible due to your support, I would not be able to do this otherwise. So thank you!

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Jason P

Game play that would be fun for me to see more of (hello, new fan here). Kali, she has some fetish that we don't really get to play on repeat, and I love how rough she loves it. More please. Same for the clones where I got to play an anal scene with both of them involved, but it wasn't replayable, at least I couldn't figure out how to do it again. I agree on more spanking/bruising and BDSM. There are also certain punishments that might be fun if the characters "ranked up" in them in that they came to enjoy or even request the punishment, if done enough. Lin begging master to cum on the floor so it tastes better, would be an example. Or, the urine becoming delicious instead of disgusting (maria's reaction was funny... drink more water MC!!!) or orgasms or dripping graphics from spanking as well as redness or bruising. Moon has a dynamic scene where you can cut to the chase or play around, that's also a lot of fun, particularly around pain/marking. The ability to edge and make cum during regular sex until "done" or for the MC to orgasm multiple times could be fun too. I assume I'll get to explore the city in the new content I'm downloading (I've only played .14 to conclusion), and I think that's a fantastic idea. I also love Lin and Maria assisting in the corruption of others and I would LOVE more content like that. Maybe they could assist with new punishments in the dungeon or in training new slaves? It would be nice to have an automatic sleep selection, instead of selecting each night. Much like the alarm. A manual selection is good, but sometimes I just want it on auto with a few less clicks. The garden thing sounds cool, and I appreciate the lack of a grind. Your game has a moderate grind to start, but there's purpose and it became less grindy as it went on. I love that. Great job.

Perniciousducks

I think the SFW paths are interesting in theory, but I feel like a massive amount of content will need to be reworked significantly and I don't know that I'd be super thrilled with so much time being committed to that particular endeavor that could be spent elsewhere

Trevor Pearce

All of this sounds great and would make harem hotel one of the best games ever but I fear your tsking on alot specifically the sfw path

Runey

I wouldn't do it if it took too much time.

Runey

a SFW path is mostly just adding the option to say "no". Most dialogue already checks to see what you've done anyway.

Trevor Pearce

Ohhh well that makes sense and seems great!

Trevor Pearce

This diary was a really good ides

Brotherchar

Could you clarify what you mean by dungeon content on the table? In my opinion, one of the most enjoyable aspects of the game would love to see it expanded. And would you mean that the dungeon content could potentially be revamped or be reduced? Or enhanced?

Runey

Being on the table means that it is an option. I haven't ruled it out, but I haven't chosen it yet. But it is likely.

James J Kelly

All of this sounds great. One thing that you did not mention that I think would be easy and add to the dynamism of the game is finer control of outfits. This would be a screen where one could specify Lin, for example wear an outfit during the week in her room, another in the lobby and a third on the weekends.

Brotherchar

Copy that. Very glad to hear that it won't be reduced but that it is considered for possible expansion. I appreciate your succinct response. Thank you

James J Kelly

I have some thoughts on the power play involved in the dungeon. I think the psychological aspects of the play could be a little more diverse. I'll let you know.

Fury.MB

After you unlock the mega slut trait whenever they are in the hallway (between the shower, hot spring, and laundry) masturbating, do you plan on making more interactive seens there?

Dubsington

Garden: That could be interesting. Suggestion: Have the non-cash crops *cost* money to farm. The early game needs cash sources, but once you've bought all the slaves the game badly needs cash sinks. The garden could be a cash source in the early game (actively growing hops and selling it), and a cash sink in the late game (buy expensive seeds to grow lust beans). SFW path: Given the amount of flags in a game this size, this sounds like a drain of programming time for a route I will never play. You gave some reasons for it, but I'd rather it not be a thing. Phone: I'd rather see the effort put into the security cams. For example, the rooms with multiple girls in them could have lesbian scenes. "How are you" expansion: Seems like good value for the effort, I like the idea. You are already tracking sex stats so you could have them make comments when you his thresholds and such. Music: I know some people really enjoy OST music, but it doesn't do much for me. I don't think it is a great use of money. Remakes: As long as it does not become a huge time sink, this would be good, especially for the repeatable scenes (so that we will be able to enjoy the changes without having to start a new playthrough.) Side characters: Yes, please. There are some great sides in the game, and more interaction with them in the hot springs or dungeons would be great. I'd also like to be able to bring multiple girls into the dungeon-- there are some natural pairings that would be very exciting (the clones, Kali & Lucia, Lin & Jin, Kim & Ami.) More Explore: No opinion. The game warned me that it might be problematic to check it out in my playthrough, so I haven't tried it yet. Holidays: I'd rather not. The worldbuilding in HH is interesting, but it is not what I play it for. I like it as a setting to give the characters personality and depth (and thus make them more engaging and likable), but I'd rather have more scenes with the girls than lore dumps. Gallery: Yes please. A lot of the sexiest scenes (e.g. Autumn & Maria) can't be found in there.

Kris Anderson

My own musings: 1) Given the MC's interaction with both criminals and "law abiding" folks, it would seem to be logical to have some sort of "sliding scale". In my experience, criminals don't really trust people, especially people who are "goodie two shoes" that may turn them in. On the other side, the MC does operate basically an illegal slave network so keeping his image clean would be important for legitimate dealings. 2) I like Kali's expansionism idea but, another hotel would just be redundant. Buying/investing in local business markets like the slave sellers on the beach, the strip club, clothing outlet, etc., not only influences income and contacts but allows for distribution of our "girls" in need of either legit work or "hiding in plain sight". 3) There is a certain event that I cannot shake a suspicious view of. I rather doubt security would be so light on such a *rare* find. Moles are often more trustworthy when they seem harder to obtain. 4) I *really* need an erotic cat fight between Ellen and Ashley's teacher. And lastly (for now), 5) The Fairies need to earn their keep. Perhaps by doing surveillance, recon, and intelligence gathering for Nia once they have truly "thrown their lot in with ours". ------ As for SFW, sure. To be honest though, the people most likely to play HH are not likely to waste time with a "PG-13" version. But, hey, if it helps, I'm all for it!

Benevolent Cerc

Getting custom themed music would take things up a huge notch. I generally turn the in game music off and listen to some Lofi streams- but music tailor made for the actual game would be a big deal. I also love the garden idea.

Deadly021

looking forward to some added dungeon content. also the more character story content.

Runey

To clear some things up Any crop that doesn't generate money will cost money. A SFW "path" is me simply adding an option to refuse sex whenever it is presented. Holidays are not lore dumps. The ideas presented are Holidays. Either mechanical or in a story event.

JD

The story is great, but more sexual content is the real draw for me. Definitely more scenes and more in the dungeon. I'd really like the option to get busy with Jin post rehab, I really found her slutty side hot and would like some way to get back to that even without the hormones.

Selek

Wow. This is going to make a good game even better.

Kennyannydenny

One thing I'm missing from this list, and I could've sworn you mentioned in in the past in comments, are your plans for the Sanctuary. I believe you said back then (and I support that fully) was to add more to the Sanctuary in the style like Peni etc, minor interactions but with their own scenes. I for one, as you probably know by now, would love to see Serni added as a character, even if it's just in Peni-style. Serni deserves to be rescued just as much as all other elves that were part of the group scene in Lin's route. Also, I hope you planned for Jin to be dateable again after her rehab is done. She's a wonderful person and I'd love to be able to date her when she can make that decision on her own without the hormone pills influencing her thoughts. So in short, a love route for Jin with some repeatables like the 'main' elves in the Sanctuary get. As for the rest: I play the game muted as I share this house with others and I cannot hear them coming up the stairs when I have sound turned on in adult games, so that wouldn't change much for me, but others that use sound would probably love that. I love the idea of the garden and growing plants, but I would like the option to skip growing stuff for Naki, that would make me really uncomfortable, especially seeing what it does to some people in the world (the man living in the dumpster and that elf that came asking for food during the Autumn event, etc) SFW path, not something I would ever use and I don't think many current players would (we're here for an adult game), but it might attract new people that aren't into adult games but do like this storyline. Expanding How are you dialogue sounds great, I sometimes still use it but it doesn't have much use at this point since stuff doesn't really change that much. Remakes sound good, consistancy is important for a game like this and I get that some scenes aren't up to par anymore now that the followup content is there. I support you fully here as long as an update isn't just 100% remakes. Side characters, yes please! Vanessa, Ellen, Kate, Julie, Moon, hopefully Sylvia and the other elves too I would love to get some repeatable content for. The Hot springs do look like a great way to do that. More explore content, yes please! I'd love to learn more of the Drow, Serni's heritage etc. Holidays: A calender with birthdays and holidays sounds like a good idea. It would make the world feel alive a bit more than it feels now. At the end of the day, i'm here because it is an adult game, but I enjoy the story and lore fully and wouldn't mind it being expanded upon. As long as updates also contain the juicy stuff :P As for the gallery, yes please expand it. Also, I'd love the option that it remembers the name I've put into my game (or lets me set up one specifially for the gallery) so that they don't use that generic term I already forgot. Some scenes, like the group scene in Lin's route also always fails in the gallery even though I've done it with the best results in my saves.

James J Kelly

I also would like to see this. There could be encounters like, but different to, those in the lobby. This way, women that are hanging out in the lobby are generally (but not always) just hanging out. The hall space could be a more public place for sex where women are (mostly) DTF, bound and waiting, having sex with other women, etc. Also, I think that room should be the tv room, and the lobby be turned into a lounge or area for reading or tablet use. Presumably the dining table is off to the left. These things seem like things he has just not gotten to yet.

Marutain

I'm not gonna write an essay, but good work, great ideas. Can't wait for the new beta. I'll see it when it drops. Until then, keep it up! A fan, ~Maru

NakedAlice

Yes, I think I like your idea to do Dev Diaries every Monday , it will be useful. I definitely like that you are going to make the Harem Hotel bigger.

Sh0tgun_Jacks0n

[didn't read the body] FUCK YEAH, BIKE PARADE!! (I'm joking, y'all. Don't come after me)

M@rco!

Very interesting ideas! Well done...

CFerK

I don't care if the game size exceed the 100Gb, as long as there is a choice to download in parts (Please, I don't have a NASA internet). For the SFW I think that help you have more players, that they only want a love history. To me, is a great idea, go ahead 👍

SithXterminator

I would like to have sex with Jin after she's been rehabilitated. possibly use a "corruption" system where she may revert to her old form if you do it too many times in a set period

Long Tran

I'm all for the gardening and overall desire for more story content/NSFW options which are admittedly the biggest draw for me. I really love the phone idea though. Random chats would be pretty cool! As for the SFW version? ...I honestly don't care either way beyond maybe getting to reach a wider audience and exposure to your work. I'm happy as is with respect to it being a hentai sandbox, but I get the desire for more exposure options. But, there are plenty of 18+gaming storefront platforms too even if they aren't as big as steam. I kinda hate steam for how censor happy the platform is though. Regardless, beat of luck and I'll personally continue to support your masterpiece of a game for the time being.

Tony

So, as for the SFW option, I do think it would be interesting to have a sort of buffet-style approach to lewd content, choosing who you want to, and don't want to have intimate relations with. On the new main character: I'm excited, but I also really feel like the characters we have right now are such a tight-knit little family, that it'd be interesting to see how the newcomer would interact!

J

Apologies for the wall of text. @.@ Farmable Garden: Imho, I think Naki ingredients should stay off the list of crops unless it's coming with a morality system. I'm generally not against ingesting drugs for recreation, but Naki appears to be a very hard drug, so I feel like it ought to have in-game consequences if it was ever introduced. I enjoyed the introduction of the Myconids. Any plans for having gentle or minimally threatening animals visit the garden occasionally? I wouldn't mind spending on an upgrade to open up the garden more to let in some wildlife. Yay for Jin! I'm glad she'll be getting more development and helping add more life to the garden. Also HOORAY for upcoming Harvest Moon mechanics! Will she be getting a harvest sprite outfit too? ;) Interactive Mobile Phone: Wouldn't mind something like a codex, like in a lot of modern single player games. i.e. Entries that introduce each character and add more context as you go through each story event. Is that the intention? More nudes? Yes, please. Booty calls for side characters in the future?? Maybe? PLEASE!?!!?? <3 Making Sex Completely Optional: Silly. :3 But I'm all for it, if it helps get this awesome game more attention. Expanding the "How are you?" Dialogue: Also wouldn't mind the girls commenting on MC spending money on the Bunnies. Maybe before initiating intimacy. Maybe further on in development? Adding Themed Music: Not too fussed about this. DLC does seem like a good option for those who want it, though. We're all accessing the game through the internet anyway, what's a few more kb/mb worth of music? If anyone takes the job, I'd like to request more lo-fi and smooth jazz, please. And thanks in advance for the contribution! <3 Remakes, Remakes, Remakes: Thanks, Thanks, Thanks. Your care for the game is greatly appreciated, noble Lord. Side Character Content: Starting from 0.17 I hope! Wouldn't mind Kim and Ami. :3 Then again, Nala hasn't indulged yet... Also, teasing fairy content... Uuummmm... I'm asking for a friend. More Explore Content: Revisit meaning more side stories or repeatable content? i.e. BunBun Brothel. Either would be good. Maybe there'll be more opportunities to see even more characters out and about? Going about their day-to-day routines. Holidays: Great Potential for gold sinks right here. It'd be great to have repeatable birthday content where we can spend a chosen amount on the main girls. Not that I hate stockpiling money, but why have so much if you won't share it? And if that's feasible, then maybe hosting (spending on) holiday celebrations could be interesting too. A new Main Character: Have we already seen her in a prior event? Also, I'd love to hear about your process/inspirations for writing new characters. Is that something you'd be willing to put out there? I wouldn't even minding spending a bit more just for that behind-the-scenes sort of content. Gallery updates: Well, there's a lot of save slots, so take your time. XD

Jeremy Fecteau

I like the ideas you stated and I look forward to seeing them. I do have three suggestions to think about on top of the list. 1) An expansion/rework of the Pin-ups. I know that the money reward from them was bumped up but honestly, I think a rework would be better, and also add the new costumes as well. 2) The security cameras could use some love. It seems a neat opportunity to add some scenes you wouldn't see otherwise. 3) Update/rework the UI for the computer in the MC Room. Love the new UI for the Stat screen, would love to see the Computer get the same treatment

J

As per security cameras, I'd love to see an upgrade option. We could add a couple external ones for the entrance, garden and hot springs. Maybe even one for the sanctuary? Would allow for more opportunities to see Nia stumbling home to unwind after the previous evening's work.

RogueKnight

cant wait to see the new main character when they are added

Brandon S

Very interested in this new main character idea. Unrelated, but I would also love to have an option for characters to gain weight.

Jrockn

My own personal suggestions regarding the writing. While I do enjoy many stories that allow the player to make choices altering the story line I do really appreciate that HH doesn't do too much of that. The story is being told and we're along for the ride for the most part and that's just fine by me. That said, it makes it more difficult to then reveal the character of the MC in a way that feels like it isn't just sex-centric as it is, at heart, a porn game. Much of what our MC does and the choices made don't change the storyline, which as I said I don't think is a bad thing, but the MC lacks a lot of what makes a character real. We know the MC is inherently a few things, such as horny, adventurous, and dedicated but our MC also is lacking in discernible, real, and consequential flaws. As a player we are almost always rewarded for being a hoe(not that that's a bad thing in a porn game), but it means the MC being a horn dog doesn't really add any dimension to them as a character in the story. The closest we come to seeing the MC have some sense of serious individual decision making outside of horniness, woman collecting, or being asked what MC's favorite food is would be(spoiler ahead alert) when on the elf island facing off against the queen or in the recent gambling scene. The MC is making choices that would not only impact their relationship with the women MC wants to bang, but also society as a whole and their own personal safety which speaks to the MC either being very dedicated to the women or the cause. Maybe both. Otherwise, it's hard to think of any moment where a choice made by the MC couldn't be explained as simply chasing the girls. Allow for situations where the MC has to make realistic decisions and allow the MC to fail. Give the MC an opportunity to succeed at something that is solely a personal goal and has nothing to do with the women(this could be the monetary aspect of the game, except without the money there is no hotel, which means no women). Maybe at some point in the past MC wanted to be a really good pole-vaulter, just some kind of skill, past time, goal, etc. that helps flush the MC out as a real individual. More backstory for the MC is also great, anything to make the MC feel like more than a means to have sex with the women will add drastically to our understanding of the MC's motivation, character, and just makes the MC more interesting as well adds context to all the choices made by the different characters. For example, if the MC lost their father and mother at a young age, was in a long term relationship that crapped out because MC's significant other left them, and has struggled to keep friends it really helps explain why the MC is actively collecting a harem and tries exceptionally, unordinarily hard to keep them around because the MC is clearly dealing with some abandonment issues. If you plan to go a SFW route, I would definitely recommend getting more MC backstory because without the sex/intimate relationships I would be very confused as to why the MC is so committed to helping these women without further explanation. As it stands, it's sometimes a little shaky at how far an extent I believe the MC would go but I'm willing to fall back on the usual 'the dude's horny' explanation a lot of the time due to the nature of the game/story. With that said, if you want to go further into the game mode of 'the players choose the story" rather than giving us the story, I would probably keep much of the same style as you have it. You want us, the reader, to project ourselves into the seat of MC. Thus far I feel you have sort of toed the line between the two, which is fine, but if you want SFW you may want to choose more concretely. Anyway, sorry for the wordsplosion ;) Dev diaries are always great, it helps build the hype and helps you see what people are most excited for/interested in. Definitely down. A garden sounds alright, although as a whole I would be more interested in how it can affect the story. The gameplay you have right now is wonderful, I would suggest building upon the parts of the game that help the player learn more about the characters, spend time with them, and get scenes rather than a chore. Unless you really plan to make something serious out of the garden that has it's own appeal game design wise, I personally, as my own opinion, would focus time elsewhere. Expanding how are you's is great, adds more life to each character in a simple way. Good idea. Music as a whole I definitely feel could see some improvement, as much as the main theme has become ingrained within me as the soundtrack for everything HH. Just a few more basic soundtracks to set the mood for specific events adds a lot to storytelling. Wish I could compose, maybe DJ? Remakes and revisions can be great, I'll keep an eye out for errors. Side character content would be awesome. More is always better. And nearly all of the current side characters already have a believable enough reason to be around the hotel and MC. Good stuff. Explore is really really great! Explore gives us a chance to see the MC interact with the world without any of the girls around and has already helped flesh the MC out a lot more. Use the explore options to really reveal the MC's character, as we can see how the MC acts without the threat of consequence or judgement from the harem. The church, the locals, beggars, criminals, you've already built a great spectrum of demographics to interact with. More more more! In game holidays that are based on the game lore is an excellent idea, it helps make the world of HH feel more legitimate and like time is really passing for our characters. Building on that, adding in personal events(birthdays, anniversaries, remembrance of passed family(grandpappy)) only adds to this system. I'm sure you're quite busy with working on the game and while I had some fun spitballing ideas here, I do hope at least something here is helpful. If you don't want to read it all, thanks for the work on the game so far. Fun, interesting, good times.

Shremedy

A Farmable Garden? Sure. Cool that it provides task for Jin. "Actively gaining income can be fun to an extent, but when grindy becomes a chore." Amen! "The garden could include food crops [...] This will save you money, as there are so many mouths to feed." How to reckon it? Since the rent seems a little low, I regard it as actually being the *profit* you make from the amount they actually pay, after you pay fixed costs like the hotel's utility bills. So growing own food would maybe add maybe $1-2 per tenant per day, even if the tenant (like Ashley) isn't actually paying rent. Or maybe add up the food savings every week, like the bar? "The garden could include cash crops such as Tinu, Hops, or maybe even an ingredient for Naki." While 'high risk, high reward' is a valid concept, and players may want that, I'd veer away from naki because of the unwelcome attention it could bring to other operations (like Nia's), from government, law enforcement, and/or rival gangs. We've gotten a hint of that once already. Android is an excellent bodyguard, but this might militarize her too much if she has to protect "the stash". "The garden could include stat crops such as lust beans to increase lust manually, or something that causes an experience multiplier to stat, such as gaining 2 anal points during a single action instead of 1." I'm actually trying to not build up stats unnecessarily! Once I make a goal, I tend to leave it. Freestyle sex is great for doing an act without increasing act count. If you set an alarm clock and never change it, one girl could get a blowjob stat of several *hundred* while all of the other stats are maybe around the dozen range! "Could unlock a SFW path." Best to reformat HH more like a VN for that, because the game mechanics (such as they are) and stats are all built around sex. Relationship tracks how much plot has been uncovered, so the only other useful stat in SFW-HH would be Obedience/Affection. Anything not mentioned? Potentially interesting, just no comment one way or another.

Alexander May

Runey, I have to compliment your work, I usually am very picky when it comes to these interactive visual novel+ kind of games, lose interest quickly, don't finish them let alone pledge support on patreon to the creator, but here I am! Love the different story lines of the characters, the things about society being questioned, artifical intelligence, life, equality and all. Some solid story writing. One small thing that I can think of to improve upon (apart from continuing the story of course): Give the MC a bit more character, another commenter already put it quite well: he feels like a horny empty shell of a man. I know putting "peronal traits" in the MC would complicate things and either have to be player chosen or you might change the MC in a way that some people can't identify with him anymore. BTW: It would be an interesting concept if the Cynari "evolution" would somehow be connected to the liberation of the elves. Just a thought floating in my mind. Keep up the good work.