[Spice] Ritual 3, + layout edits on pgs 1-3 by Hari draws- [See description] (Patreon)

Prose + drawing format discontinued- to be finished in a different format!

These are beautiful wonderful (rough, obviously!) edits my friend Hari made, I was struggling to get my writing to a place that I liked, and they had this really cool idea to crop it up like this. The plan was for me to remake these properly, and then reconfigure the script + sketches I had left into this more sparse + emotive format.

However. I could not do it haha. I guess editing text like this is actually a very writer-y thing to do, and . I have found I am not a writer. I didn't want these to go to waste, so I figured I'd share them together here!

Tbh it's so difficult for me to let go of something once I've set out to do it, I'm very determined (stubborn) so having to admit that this isn't working for me is hard! I've seen so many artists try prose as an accompaniment to their art, and I think wow, that looks so convenient and a much faster way to tell a story. But for me writing even a sentence of prose is kinda like pulling teeth, there may have been tears involved. I think people that switch from art to prose probably...enjoy writing. Oops.

Thanks for your patience while I worked this out... I was much slower than I thought I would be, and tbh I'm itching to get on with other things!

I'll be doing a couple of drawings to finish this sequence! (The first of which I am posting nnnow)

U should buy and read Hari's Charlatans if u like sexy complicated power dynamics >:).