Colleen, Pose C (Patreon)

Continuing what I went off of with the previous two sketches https://www.patreon.com/posts/11127705 , I wanted to do another. I kept trying, and trying, to make the others work. They were nice, but... not really what I wanted. I dunno, hard to explain. It just didn't leap out at me how I wanted, even though a lot of you voiced liking one or the other, particularly B. So I may go in and do a coloured-sketch of that one later on, too, but I'm preeetty sure I'll go with this pose C, here, for a few reasons. 

I think i can visualize this angle, and these alts, better. I think it's a closer-in, more cropped-up shot that brings us "in" to the scene rather than looking on from a distance like a bystander. Some of the parts on A and B felt a little stiff, and I wasn't convinced of her face structure on either. Cute, but I dunno, didn't feel very 'Colleen' I guess. 

I hope you guys will agree with C here, that'd make picking which one that much easier! I'm just happier with it overall; face, body, etc. yanno. I don't like settling for less with the monthly pinup. Shown here are just some alt ideas. Feel free to comment on any more you might suggest or want to see.