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https://www.dropbox.com/s/559fa611r0zu6mg/Predators2page11_HD.png?dl=0

Here's the finished page! I quite like how this one came out overall. Tala looks good in the center, Bailey's expression amused me, and grandma i think looks good too. More of her on the next page or two. Tweaked dialogue, cleaned up balloons.

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KHVathiel

You did a good job here, excellent expressions :D

Antoine Davis

Awesome, the shading looks great and amazing dialogue.

Anonymous

Hahaha I laughed the first time she said oh hell no and I laughed this time.

Saitumex

i love bayley's reaction xD

Bionet

That's a pretty good surprised reaction!

Evangellos

Since Bae'li has an Irish accent, can you have her say something along the lines of "for f**ks sakes man, what's wrong with yea?!" At some point in the comic? Haha!

FluffKevlar

i'm still not sure on her accent tbh. irish is one idea, but i havent thought about her voice too much. maybe black-irish?

ExtremistLine

So now that it's colored and clearer to see, I have to ask what's actually going on with Tala in the first three panels, is she sweating just from nervousness or is she in something like a sweat lodge? It looks kinda like they just poured water on like, hot rocks if I'm not mistaken. Oh and as for Bailey's accent, the 'sugarpaws comment a few pages back kinda makes me picture slightly black-Southern maybe? Well awesome page regardless, still love the "AWW HELL NAAAW" X3