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Page 12, Bae'li and Grandma, for a brief moment anyway. I rearranged the page and dialogue since the sketch phase to clean it up, clear it up, and be a little tighter and more concise in delivery and panel visual balance.

We've had a few pages of Tala, a few pages of Bailey, some story and setting. Time to set off! Page 13 will finally push the two out together into the night.

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Wat

Can I change my stream sketch request to GILF? :V

Antoine Davis

Oh wow Grandma, just wow. This is fantastic, can't wait to see what happens next. Also, did you get my question from the #2 live stream post? Either way, i still wonder about Tala's parents and a bit more about her past, but I'm sure that'll be revealed soon. But until then, this was great.

FluffKevlar

You know, part of me was waiting for someone to make this joke suggestion. >:V At first I thought "yeah...no." But after drawing her in this page I'm more "dammit.. maybe. it could be a challenge." But you get like 1 request every 18 months on average so if you want to totally do that I won't stop you, haha

Todd Whitesel

lol TMI. gotta hand it to granny there

DrakoWerewolf

I knew those seeds enhance sex life. Why else would they sprout when covered in cum?

DarkWolfElite

So those were the beans Rehzi was carrying...

Hafunui

bottom-left frame is precious haha. Nicely framed

Alex

Grandma is my new favorite bear

Murphyslaw

Hahaha love that bottom left panel. Nice use of contrast in moods between these last couple of pages, needed something to breakup and highlight the seriousness of the current situation, gj. Also like the paneling on this page as well and the characters positions within each frame. Could say more, but realized I'm going full teacher mode >_> Keep up the good work!

BusterSlug

Lol, glad we got the finalized page! Looking forward to the rest.