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Page 13! Tala and Bailey are off after a brief re-introduction, both with their own goals and destination for the summit. This was a page I had in my head for a while, and it kind of marks the end of 'Act 1' so to speak. I'm sure I'll find something somewhere in here that needs fixing or tweaking later on and I'll have to go back and fix it. It always happens. Enjoy, I hope! 

And thank you for letting me make this at my own pace, for all the feedback and support!

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Antoine Davis

This is awesome, i love the night sky visuals on the last panel. Actually no, i love all of it. Can't wait for more.

Kraton Haddock

lol I take it Bailey is bi, and there's likely to be something happen between the two of them on the trip. :P

Antoine Davis

Also, i wonder what the climb will be like, will it be mostly forest, snow and trails, or a mix of both?

Synariel

That ass was begging to be spanked

Skeleton Man

Im not getting bored of that slap :3

Silvador

idk about part 1, maybe more like act 1?

TouchFluffyTail

Yes. That cute butt needs a couple more slaps. I volunteer.

Shinault Sketches

What needs to happen is some hot Bailey tala lesbian sex scenes, maybe a 3 way with a male. 😍

Xpray

That background in the last panel looks amazing. Great work!

Kenith Fox

I have really enjoyed the comic so far and it is pretty much something I look forward to every month now. I got the other pages from the "whateverthefuckitiscalled" site just to catch up. Love the humor, story and characters; in fact, I almost wish it was not a porn comic. It's pretty interesting that you can make a character, Tala, that I don't fully want to see in explicit situations unless they are not of a "porn narrative" or "let's just fuck" nature. That being said, I won my 11th national masturbating competition metal with your art work, good job.

FluffKevlar

Hahah, thank you! Your comment means a lot. I too, wondered at times if I made Tala too innocent or such for porn, but alas, it's a bit of a self-identity and coming of age on her end, so hopefully it works out! I'm glad you like it, and my work, I appreciate the details written out here!

FluffKevlar

It's mostly snow and rock. The forest around Denali is pretty light; even here I have it denser than it really is, but mostly for aesthetics.

FluffKevlar

Haha, I mentioned in another comment above I tried to make it as 'slappable' as possible. I think it came out okay then!

Antoine Davis

Yeah, like i really do like Tala, in which i don't see her in sexual content. But i understand what you mean with the self-identity, being straight, and coming of age. Still, you're doing great.

Antoine Davis

Who knows, for i think that Tala is straight, Bailey is Bi, and Massak is also straight, it's just the situation they'll be in that makes this a F/M/F.

ChromeFox

Tala is so cute I can't handle it ; w ;