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Been a month! After taking a switch-course for that mini-comic, I'm working on the next few pages of PoD kind of simultaneously, hence the slightly less-frequent updates atm. I want to make sure these few pages flow nicely, and spending more time on the sketch and dialogue phases make me much more comfortable and confident that it's convincing, enjoyable, and supportive of the actions-to-come.

Let me know what you think of the page and comic! I always try to tackle issues as-they-come or make sure that it's a fun read. We're almost at the start of serious goodness, so, while I'm excited to get to it, I don't want the pacing to go all to heck, or for stuff to sound cheesy. Enjoy! Will be finishing this up before month's end.

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Skeleton Man

maybe Tala will change her hobbys after this trip is over ;3

Antoine Davis

Cool, so far things look alright. Also some more backstory is pretty cool and some facts. Also, i like how you give Tala hobbies in which building her character more.

Antoine Davis

Nah, i wouldn't say that she'd be like 'that' after the climb, but would learn how to fend for herself and others.

Antoine Davis

The comic is fantastic so far, what i recommend is to have story and characters first and (somewhat) fan service last, which you're doing well so far.

Kenith Fox

It seems that my old comment is gone, don't know why. Long story short, It is a good read.

ExtremistLine

The character building here is really nice and I love how Tala is so far! It's just kinda hard to tell who's saying what in sketch form.

Kenith Fox

I'll try to rewrite it in case you wanted to know what it said. Aw, poor Tala and her low self-esteem. It seems like she wants a more meaningful relationship that is based on love. Additionally, I love how this comic is richer in character development and story. I know the point of porn is to jack the bean-stock, but I love romantic and intimate stories. However, I found it hard to follow the dialog, though it might be me. I reread the first panel a few time to understand it. Nevertheless, I enjoyed the story and can't wait for more. Keep being awesome Fluffy and know that you help me feel better!

shadowstarthe1st

The more i see of Tala, the more i fall in love with her character, shes simply adorable

The Friendly Deathclaw

Tala is My favorite of fluffs characters. <3 She is just tooooo cute!!!!!!!

Not Telling

I'm enjoying the pace. It feels like it has a lot more room to breathe than the first comic did, which is a nice difference. I see you're using it to flesh out the characters, both of whom are very likable.