Early Release - What Is Zionism? Part 1: Jews Return to Palestine (Patreon)
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Hello everyone! I decided to start trying early releases here, to give you guys something sooner, and also possibly get some feedback before I release it to the general public. I uploaded a version earlier today with a layer that didn't render in the timeline, so it had a bunch of visual bugs. I took that version down and re-uploaded this, so it should be release-worthy quality now.
About the piece:
If you weren't aware, I've been working on a big piece on Zionism. It started to run so long that I decided to break it into pieces. So it will now be a three part series. This is the first of those three parts.
What you're looking at can basically be considered the finished product. I might add a little sound design, re-record a couple lines here and there, but also maybe not. Consider this more or less the finished piece. If you want to wait a few days and see the actually finished piece, that's up to you, but it's probably going to be virtually the same thing.
So 1) Thanks again, so much, to everyone here for supporting me. It's really a major relief in my life to have this, your support, and even the community here.
2) If you want to critique the video, consider this an open forum. I'll be reading all the comments and responding wherever appropriate. Everything is up for grabs - factual mistakes (!), tonal issues, parts that work, parts that don't, things you wish were included, things you could see cut, whatever you want to say. No feedback is too small. I'm interested in feedback for my own personal growth, and because I think it's interesting, but also in this case we have an opportunity we actually improve the piece before I release it to the public. If you have a fact that would actually enhance the piece, for example, I can throw it in.
Alright, enough preamble. Enjoy the piece! And thanks again for the support.
If you want to watch the private link on YouTube, it's here - https://youtu.be/bVg3ISHc92c
- Ryan
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