The coming over (Reposting) (Patreon)

Hello, everyone, it has been a while since posted this story, The Coming over,  and since I just reviewed it, today I'm reposting it with some corrections. 

Besides some others I believe it's a fun story to also resume for this month, what do you think? :)

if you already read, I just did some slight change in some dialogues, but overall it's pretty much the same till where it stopped;

I hope you like it  

Thank you!