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A little re-write (Patreon)

Published:
2024-11-28 02:00:38
Edited:
2024-11-28 18:12:00
Imported:
2024-11

Poll

A little re-write

  • Yes, I'm ok with removing this conversation 38
  • No, I signed up because of this conversation 3
  • 2024-11-28
  • —2024-12-04
  • 41 votes
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Content

 Those of you that have played have seen this scene. It's Will at the Theater. I was not happy at all with this. He was meant to be just a guy who was super excited with seeing Devon. Got a little carried away and tried something with Devon. Not the dude I ended up writing him to be. I made a mistake.Because this affects everyone. I've opened the vote to all paying patrons.

So here is what I would like to do. I'd really like to remove this conversation with Will at the end. It's just removed. There isn't anything replacing it. Just it never happened. This does NOT change anything that happened on the subway. Just merely how it was discussed later with Will.

I need this vote to be a high majority or I'll just leave it.

You're either ok with it being removed or you're not. If you need more clarification please feel free to contact me.

It's not to say what was discussed doesn't happen. Just this convo never did, at least not as it is now.

I'll give this a week to see whats what.

Edit:Some clarification. Also just to point out again. I'm not saying what he said isn't going to happen. Just maybe the conversation needs to be just toned down a little.

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Comments

Samsungnote007

Thanks for asking, but it's your game. Remove or leave the content, it's up to you. We're just along for the ride

studio68games

Appreciated. I still don't want it to be that someone signed up because of that. I'd hate to have signed up because of that.. and then the dev killed it.

Rodney

Well, as we've discussed on Discord earlier, that scene went from kinky (let's try again in the subway) to overly perverted (gonna gangbang her with my pals). I'm still interested in seeing that tho... but let's first enjoy Devon ourselves. So, yeah, that can go...

Vilesh Darothar

I know we've discussed this conversation before - your best friend warns you away from Will if you go down some of the paths and Will just sounds like he wants to break Devon. That seemed fairly clear signposting to be careful. In any other game this would be the bad guy trying to steal the main LI. Came off totally different to the rest of the vibe of the game and I avoided that route despite really liking consensual gangbangs/corruption.

JD2.0

Re-writes happen all the time. If 99 people say remove it and 1 person says keep it are you going to discount the 99 people over the 1? What if that 1 person was a troll who just voted to fuck with everyone else? Go with the majority of the vote, not this "all or nothing" stuff, that does nothing but piss people off who feel it didn't fit and would like it gone. Especially since you don't feel (based on your post) that it was even meant to be in there to begin with.

JD2.0

Will came off as a dude who see's women as objects or things to use and toss away. If that's what people like that's fine, but that doesn't seem to be what the MC and Devon are moving toward (or I could be wrong too). Could there be gang-bangs and things in the future, sure, but I'd like to think it's more of a "it's all fun" type group thing and not basically dehumanizing someone and treating them as less than someone with their own likes and dislikes, but things to use.

Are D-H

He sounds like a predator with predator friends. We do not want to have that in our "life". We have discussed this much and I agree with the comments above...it is down to what you want, but I voted to remove the conversation.

Are D-H

I totally agree with this comment!!

studio68games

You're not wrong. I changed to "I need this vote to be a high majority or I'll just leave it."

studio68games

Agree'd. Will was just written wrong. I could have done better.

studio68games

I just want to point out that this post has the most comments ever! LOL.

JD2.0

Probably because some want every woman to be an insta' slut, especially if they don't initially seem the type like Devon, and others want to actually keep the story to make sense and not have the women in this game be like every other supposedly 'sharing' based game where the women are insta' sluts/whores and fucking everyone but the MC (or the MC is the cuck type and wants them to fuck others except him).

studio68games

TBH I Even felt Devon saying I'd like to help with that was too much but at the same time not.. I don't mean right now.. but maybe later. I feel helped. Trying to walk the fine line of speeding things up, and still making sense. I felt the convo with Will was way over the line.

KPO

Hmm, I was excited when I played this cause It basically locked in a option for Devon with other people. It vocalized it inside the game world if you get what I mean. As long as that is still happening in some way, then Im perfectly ok. I can definitively see how he come across too hard or aggressive or something like that for a lot of people. Also, removing one conversation is a lot better/easier to take than removing multiple scenes midway through development that I have seen some games do previously (Usually not well received).

studio68games

Nothing will change on how it will develop game wise. Just merely a conversation that doesn't happen. Everything will still happen with Will. And if at some point the MC says no. Will has gone far enough.. Then that's that. That event will be done for that MC. Otherwise it will continue the next time they are on the subway.