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welp here we are. it's a bit clunky and i intend to polish it over time as i'm still gettign into the groove of writing another lore heavy book. been a while since ravine. this one has that  level of complexity that i'm still figuring out how to deliver perfectly.this will still get a bunch of polish but till then, i hope you like it for at the very least its potential :)now i'm off to sleep cause i gotta get to death vigil tonightthe update starts at pdf page 30

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Raven Coldheart

Let's just hope the characters names don't get incredibly convoluted when you polish this rough diamond... Sorry, couldn't stop myself from making that pun...

Sean Carter

I love how you always tell us what page the update starts at. I know it's a trivial thing, but I appreciate it nonetheless.

Shoop83

"The update starts at PDF page 30." Thank you for that, it's super helpful. 😁

Taigan

While I understand their narrative necessity, I find timeskips annoying. “Wait! Go back! What happened with the last part!”

Lisza (edited)

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2026-09-12 02:00 Ah, you give us such lovely things <3 Thank you.
2021-10-21 14:44 Ah, you give us such lovely things <3 Thank you.

Ah, you give us such lovely things <3 Thank you.

Tim van den Berg

I love it. I hope that we may be able to buy a physical version some time in the future.

Rebecca Abram

"If you ever want to see me naked again...." LMAO

Spacecat

Did you see gw2 engineer is getting a mech!?

Ted Van Roekel

Love it! Really looking forward to this.

EKH

She has a wedding ring on 🥺

Anissa Roy

I am so in love with all of these characters already, but Sofia is my favorite.

Maz Moore

but only in 2 panels xD I missed it the first time and had to go back though

Misty F.

Been looking forward to this update!

Colby

"if you ever want to see me naked again . . ." lol

Nizing

Wonderful! The characters really dance well together. Can we please have a scene later on where Sofia becomes the team’s unbeatable arm-wrestling champ? 😂

Costanza Bertani (edited)

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2026-09-12 02:00 Whenever I read/watch something that instantly makes me go: "Man... I would give ANYTHING to have this as a single-player story-driven game and immerse myself in its world and it's characters for hours on end." I know that's something rare and precious for me. THIS is definitely the case. &lt;3 Can't wait for more.
2021-10-22 11:33 Whenever I read/watch something that instantly makes me go: "Man... I would give ANYTHING to have this as a single-player story-driven game and immerse myself in its world and it's characters for hours on end." I know that's something rare and precious for me. THIS is definitely the case. <3 Can't wait for more.

Whenever I read/watch something that instantly makes me go: "Man... I would give ANYTHING to have this as a single-player story-driven game and immerse myself in its world and it's characters for hours on end." I know that's something rare and precious for me. THIS is definitely the case. <3 Can't wait for more.

Duport Guillaume

It seems there's an issue with the text ? I'm reading it back from the start and very often the text has a weird white line in it somewhere like when a printer is starting to run out of ink. It doesn't seem to have affected the drawing, just the text

Fan

the hype is strong with this one :D

NoNameC

This was EPIC!!!

Cilou The-Fae

SO amazing! (and listening to GRIS ost reading this is GOOD!)