Helluva Trio 2 pg 36 (commentary) (Patreon)

I feel like the flow in this is a little off. Goes from Millie licking Loona's nipple to her leaning back with Loona's hand already down her pants. Loona's dialogue in panel 3 also feels abrupt and out of nowhere. Feels like there should've been an interim panel.

It's the sort of thing that can be hard to catch.