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Kelly Pickard

You requested grammar/spelling feedback, so: Frame 1 - "dissappear" should be "disappear" - "one helluva wedige" -> "one helluva wedgie" - "will I be reday" -> "will I be ready" - "my sexuality will relaign" -> "my sexuality will realign" - You shift between single and double quotes on that last one; I'd pick one and stick with it. Also, the period should go inside the quotes. So: And I hope the ladies are right and my sexuality will "realign" so that I could better adapt and "become his wife." - "pheramones" -> "pheromones" Frame 2 - "forty five minutes" -> "forty-five minutes" - "panites" -> "panties" - "manifestiations" -> "manifestations"