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Tusk AO CH # 73 NSFW (Patreon)

Published:
2020-07-27 17:00:01
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2024-04-20 01:12:10
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patricia allen

You know how to break my heart every time come on be friends no sexy shit

Mxelle Shabiine

Please don’t make them do anything stupid my heart is going to break

KaraChica

I'm worried. Because I think these two are weak for each other but they are mated to others so they should be ok. But another part of me thinks this is a good thing for final resolution of the matter, for them to talk it out but also move past it and finally close the door on the issue.

Yuki Ookami

Now I just want to reread the FangXDamien story again. My mind went to a bad place

Dawn

This still makes me feel so uncomfortable, i get they are both mated/claimed and they need to resolve what happen and dinally clear the air. I just feel this could have been done in a better way like with both couples together to hash it out. I have a bad feeling Daniel isnt foing to take this very well. Then again im not the author and we are just along for the ride bit PLEASE AUTHOR dont break our hearts, we're still recovering. Xoxo

Vailet

Man i tell yah if something were to happen to both of them.. I’m out of here! It took me forever to get over from their affair especially the fact that Fang was lusting on someone else while Daniel was pregnant

Rose Marie

Okay here are my thoughts 🤧 I know Fang and Damien are mated and won’t do anything based on the comment you made the last chapter BUT the way Fang is portrayed still having feelings for Damien is.... very uncomfortable considering he doesn’t even react to Daniel in such a manner. I see the way Daniel and Fang interact and I don’t know if it’s intentionally done this way but Daniel literally FRAWNS over Fang where Fang is very regular towards Daniel . There’s sexual chemistry but it’s not off the charts like you display with Damien and Fang. I think what’s so uncomfortable is because it’s not even Damien making the situation uncomfortable it’s Fang who acts like a starving dog anytime Damien and he are together. It makes me so sad for Daniel it’s like Fang settled for him. (even though I’m sure that’s not the case) It makes me dislike Fang so much.

Vailet

Omg exactly! Like the way I see it Fang has not gotten over with Damien at all. I bet yah if Damien wasn’t marked nor married and has returned to their lives there’s a huge chance that Fang will go straight to Damien like a dog in heat!

BloodingHeart

To be honest, if Demian hadn't married Edmund, when Fang discovered that Daniel cheated on him with Claw for years, he would have gone straight to bed with Demian, out of spite and revenge.

Vailet

Well.. U knw wat looking at it and by how the way Fang still reacts to Damien until now i guess it would have been better if that scenario actually happened. Like they’re a perfect match for each other the unfaithful husband/father and the wh*re. Daniel doesn’t need a trash like Fang! Although one can argue that at some point in time Daniel was the unfaithful one but still Daniel and Claw had a much deeper relationship. And still manage to have clean closure but I dnt knw about Fang’s case though.

BloodingHeart

Damn! I deleted a comment by mistake! I'm sorry! I was trying to copy the comment from Mari123 to paste it into google translate but accidentally deleted it T-T

Lovaboy Comics

I agree. This is super uncomfortable.

Lovaboy Comics

Ok. I need to ask this. Did you just have Daniel with Claw and Fang with Damien for an actual reason? Or was it just for drama sake? Because initially, I thought this was all to make Daniel and Fang stronger. I thought all of this was to build them up, and to in the end make them realize that despite infidelity they want each other. That people are able to make mistakes and move on. However, when you do things like this, it doesn’t feel like you’re adding anything to those lessons. It makes Fang look very weak and cheap, yet you expect us to accept him as Daniel’s Alpha? When you create scenes like this, where Fang visually shows regret at not having cheated on his husband, it makes all that they went through feel pointless. Keep in mind that your readers have to CARE about the characters. Otherwise they will just get frustrated. My advice, as a writer and fan, is to let this arc die with this conversation. It isn’t adding anything but antipathy toward your characters. Don’t cheapen the lesson you tried to create with these two.

Lovaboy Comics

Same. I’m hoping we don’t see much more of Fang in this arc. I hope the focus is just on Evan because I can’t take how weak Fang is.

Lovaboy Comics

Spite and revenge I can deal with. That’s a normal reaction out of anger. Fawning over another man’s husband? I can not deal with that. It shows how weak Fang is. At least when Claw slept around he was open about it. Fang sneaks and lies. But the thing that bothers me most is that Fang is supposed to have grown from his mistakes. This clearly shows he hasn’t.

Rose Marie

It’s okay I’ll see if I can remember it!

Rose Marie

I was going to message this as an author myself (A #1 Best Seller on Amazon might I add lol) that this Comic literal and I don’t mean this in a joking way, gives me full on depression. I’ve constantly thought about this as an author where is Fang desiring Damien is going and if I want to stay around to have my heart broken for my favorite omega Daniel time and time again. Honestly I WISH Fang would have cheated because maybe just maybe he’d have a conscious and this could be over. You’re right about Fang not seeming like an alpha he definitely acts more like a beta i think What’s so frustrating is that literally EVERY OTHER ALPHA in this comic treats their spouses and loved ones better than Fang treats Daniel lol 😂 like bruh this man aint cheated on you in over ten whole years and loved you unconditionally through your whole marriage and gave you a child he originally didn’t want and bowed his head to you and here you are a WHOLE ASS ALPHA mind you lusting for another man and acting like this man didn’t give up EVERYTHING for you. Bro throw the whole character away 😭 Fang is legit selfish and a not Alpha material. I mean this respectfully to the author your comic is great but I DESPISE Fang sorry.

Lovaboy Comics

I understand. Many of your comments I’ve seen I’ve completely agreed with. So it makes sense. You have a writers mind. I don’t want to discourage the author. She’s amazing, and to be able to elicit this response from readers just shows how much we love (d) these characters. But I don’t like contrived, cheap drama. Doing things just to get a reaction out of your readers isn’t authentic. If Fang really is just a worthless Alpha, and that’s how we’re supposed to look at him, then that’s fine. But if we’re supposed to care about him and Daniel, and we’re supposed to accept their mistakes, and move on from them, we can’t keep being shown these scenes where Fang clearly has not grown at all. 😕 PS: what is the name of your book?

Rose Marie

Omgness! Exactly! I want to see growth! Damien has grown, Daniel has grown and even Claw has grown (he called Fang when he could have marked Daniel) why is Fang still stuck in the past? Why is he so hung up on a a man who’s literally only baked a cake for him 🤨😩 like bro a cake? I wish I could add a meme Because the soulja boy one would go perfect here. Daniel for Fangs birthday was full on depressed and this man worried about not having eaten somebody cake. Fang just seems stuck. Be seems as if he’s not over what Daniel did. He seems too vindictive and that’s probably what the problem is here. He’s too bitter about what Daniel did to him years ago. Honestly I can agree I’m really ready for this Damien/Fang arch to be over. It’s almost like what’s the point of him marking Daniel is this is the type of energy he’s going to keep. But maybe you’re right he’s supposed to be a worthless Apha. I don’t have much faith in Daniel and Fangs relationship now this cheapened it. Honestly love how Damien’s character has seemingly grown he seems to remind Fang every sentence that he has Daniel I don’t see him lusting over fang he seems completely smitten with his Alpha. I’ll message you my book info! I just recently subscribed to you!

Lovaboy Comics

I agree. There's been a lot of growth in those characters. Even Damien's reaction to Fang is lukewarm. *sigh* Ah well. Hoping this resolves itself soon.

BloodingHeart

Well, the truth is that I did not expect to receive so much sand for these episodes, I have always noticed that when Daniel cheated on Fang and he behaved like a cuddly kitten with Claw there was more acceptance than when it is Fang who acts like a fool in front of Demian. I don't want to justify Fang, but from my point of view, at least he had the will to resist and be loyal to his husband. Let's take a look at Fang for a moment. He is a low class, innocent and pure alpha who fell in love with a rich and popular omega, Daniel was Fang's first and only man, we can blame Fang for (after being a faithful boyfriend and husband for over 10 years ) feel attracted to someone else? He had a crush on Demian, he almost cheated on Daniel, but he DIDN'T, he made a mistake but in the end he remained loyal to his husband, quit his job for the sake of his marriage and family. A short time later he discovered that his husband cheated on him for years as he broke his back by working trying to be worthy of someone like Daniel. And yet, instead of cheating on him and paying him the same coin, he was able to forgive Daniel and move on. Fang LOVES Daniel, perhaps he does not love him with the same intensity as before because he discovered that Daniel was not the person he thought he was, but he loves him. Fang is attracted to Demian? Yes. Just like Daniel will ALWAYS love Claw. Daniel made a fuss when he discovered that Demian was pregnant and thought that his baby's father was Claw, he went after him and even doubted whether to abandon Fang and stay with Claw but he realized that it was "too late" and chose to stay with Fang. If you weigh the mistakes they both made, I think Daniel's sins outweighed Fang's mistakes. I think everyone is being very severe with Fang and you forget that what Daniel did to him was much worse. But well, maybe I'm wrong and I'm a bad writer, I don't know.

Vailet

Amen to both of you!! Like I swear I’ve read more than a hundred omegaverse mangas and novels but there hasn’t been a time that i hated the mc/alpha/seme. Fang is by far the only mc that I felt hatred towards hopefully he’ll be the first and last..lol

Lovaboy Comics

It's not that we're excusing Daniel. I felt the same way when Daniel was contemplating leaving Fang for Claw. I felt that it was dramatic for the sake of drama, and to be honest, I didn't really enjoy that either. In fact, I stopped reading for that part. This isn't about who cheated "worse". They BOTH cheated on one another. Fang was both emotionally AND physically attracted to Damien. They also kissed. Daniel and Fang BOTH betrayed one another. I'm not taking score to see who hurt who worse, because they BOTH hurt each other. When it comes to marriage and relationships, you're not keeping score. Betrayal is a lot like sin. One does not outweigh the other. But you showed us that they were willing to forgive and move on from that pain. We were supposed to accept that they have grown and learned to forgive one another. However, you've now fast forwarded the narrative 2+ years, and I feel like, there should be more growth in Fang. Daniel had his arc with Claw. We saw him torn, we saw him overcome that temptation and go back to his Alpha. But Fang is still in the same place with Damien that he was two years ago. Recollecting over uneaten cakes?

Caroline nadeau

BloodingHeart I have the same opinion as you about Fang and Daniel 💖

Dawn

I couldn't agree with you guys more. You both have expressed how I feel when I couldnt quite put it into words. Thank you.

Dawn

I thought when Daniel was going through his arc with Claw the reason he went back to Fang was because he realised he wasn't truly in love with Claw anymore and that it was Fang who he gave himsel fully to. That was the end of it, then as Fang and Daniel continued their arc, worked on their marrige and continued on. I guess what im upset about most is this whole new Fang and Damien thing is like a smack in the face to the progress Fang and Daniel have had and is a bit disrespectful to Daniel. If you think Fang and Damien need some closure fine but please don't allow that drama to be a disservice to their family and marrige. Fang is raising an amazing little Alpha that takes his cues from him and I know he would never want Evan to repeat his mistakes. Don't look at this as us bashing you as a writer, that is far from the truth. If i thought you were a bad writer then why would i be here supporting you? Look at this as you're readers are invested so deeply into the story they would rather stop reading than to go back through the pain of history repeating itself. I love this story, so so much but as invested I am it would gut me. I mean I already have Evans life with Nathan all planned out and Daniel freaking out about becoming a grandpa and stuff. So dont feel like we're saying you're a bad writer thats not what we're saying at all. Xoxo

Vailet

It’s undeniable that both Fang and Daniel cheated with each other. However, one cannot weigh the amount or compare the sins they both made. Since the time that they both cheated was under different circumstances. Daniel during his younger days and before marriage while Fang cheated during their marriage with a child and with 10+ years of being together. I know at one point Daniel thought about maybe leaving Fang for Claw but the end did he decided to stay with his family and became very devoted towards Fang. And because of that incident a closure was made between Claw and Daniel. While Fang on the hand even though he managed to stop half way. Lusting about another man and kept on thinking even to a point of regretting everyday that nothing happened between Damien and him while he was married is still very much a form of cheating. Furthermore, just because Daniel was Fang’s first man and hopefully his last this cannot be used as an excuse to all Fang’s actions and decisions towards having an affair with Damien whilst married to. If he truly loves and respects Daniel he wouldn’t get easily be swayed by any temptation. And yeh sure he did quit found a new job but wat happens when another omega comes in to the picture? Just by asking his boss not to hire an omega only shows how weak he is as an alpha. That he still hasn’t grown and also felt no remorse of his infidelity and can be seduced anytime. I feel like he is the only character in story who hasn’t made up his mind of wether he can be truly faithful and wholeheartedly love his other half (Daniel). Even Claw already accepted fact that Daniel cannot be his even though he had the chance to make him his mate. I just wish for the Fang and Damien’s chapter to end and see more of little Evan.

Cake Fiend

You aren’t a bad writer. Please don’t think that. I see Fang’s insecurity with Daniel and it makes sense. To find out the high class Omega who you thought chose you cheated on you for YEARS is staggering. Claw is the opposite of Fang. It takes time and work to get over that. But let’s be honest, Claw would have NEVER lessened work hours to be with his family more. Fang is devoted to his family and it shows. Does he still have insecurities to work through? Yes, but that’s okay. Bloodheart, don’t let this discourage you. I think you are doing a good job.