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10-Jun-26 Artoria LAlter #2 (Patreon)

Published:
2026-06-10 08:35:51
Edited:
2026-06-10 08:48:30
Imported:
2026-06
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Don't have time to do the proofreading myself!

Help is appreciated! You can comment down below!

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King Crimson

Hehehe love Artoria so much, big boobas and blowjob 🥺❤️ For proofreading, would be better like this (but to be confirmed by native English speaker, which isn't my case) Some corrections and suggestions for better sentences. Keeping the ideas of changing how she acts when being in private, and being all naughty and lovey-dovey "Artoria, who usually makes a scary face in public" "Is acting very differently when we're alone" "She gave me a ferocious blowjob that was filled with care and passion"/ "She gave me a ferocious blowjob, being deep, sloppy and passionate" "This is a sign of her exclusive love to me only, her master"

cogrunner

this is very good can't wait for more.

Jacky Bos

Love it great art lalter love is apriciated

Crimson Mockingbird

Overall is very good but I would change some parts. "acts very differently when we're alone" and "This is a sign of her exclusive love to me, her master" Part of it for me is I'm sure if the words should be taken like this is the first time or if this is how they have been for a while. That would change some of the phrasing and language I would use.

Crimson Mockingbird

Overall is very good but I would change some parts. "acts very differently when we're alone" and "This is a sign of her exclusive love to me, her master" Part of it for me is I'm not sure if the words should be taken like this is the first time or if this is how they have been for a while. That would change some of the phrasing and language I would use.