What I Want from a New Arkham Game | SCRIPT (Patreon)

I think the first half of this is a little too bloated, I wanna cut down some of that context and get to the content more quickly, and I need to go through and clean it up and re-read it not at 4am but would appreciate any feedback! I've got a few days before I'm set to film this so I have plenty of time to review it and make changes