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I was not quite satisfied with the performance of the first Deluge video and knew I need to improve on it. One problem was the high intensity of the video - too much stuff happened too quickly and the viewers weren't able to absorb it in time. After first tests of the second episode, I realized that it would be even more intensive.
Although that video was more than 50% finished, I decided to scrap the whole episode and rewrite it. As a result I lost a week of work. Right now the animation is almost complete and I am soon moving into polishing stage. I am still planning to release the episode in February.

In the video you can see the two drafts of the same episode. First is the draft I found to be too intense and second is the improved one. There is still some things missing and you can see a lot of things that should not be there.

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Deluge II early drafts

Comments

Anonymous

Palju parem. Hea töö! ;)

Pavel Kletnoy

I like the idea that you decided to add "In previous episode" section in Draft 2.

Sitraka Forler

Génial ! It was a really great and fun video and the cut/teaser was excellent !!! :D