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Augur Book 2 Chapter 15 1st Draft (Patreon)

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2024-06-14 21:20:26
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Content

Initial unedited pass of Chapter 15.

I'm really pretty pleased with how Tzila's storyline is shaping up. It took me a little while to get a feel for the character, but she's really starting to come alive in the most delightful way as things progress.

Comments

Jackson Bates

Hooray for 15! And I had another question relating to the end of chapter nine. Is the witch dead? It felt like it from the way it was written, and if so, why? The Mondjoli was mentioned as not being her slave earlier so if he didn't hurt her earlier, why would he do so now? Did the removal of her arm break the pacts she had made and Sema somehow felt it and took advantage of her weakness?

C. W. March
>>140886458

In this case I left it deliberately ambiguous, but I will point out the many, many times Janssens being a horrible person who openly exploited the magical creatures of Africa as a potential reason why a member of that community might wish to harm her.

Jackson Bates
>>140886458

Fair enough. I enjoyed this chapter, and am looking forward to Tzila's inevitable surrender!