Yet more B2 progress (Patreon)

I'm continuing to write the new chapter 17 as well as going through with my editing pass. The image in the post is a snip of Scrivener, the tool that I'm trying out for this process. You can see that while I am actually making pretty good progress, I probably still have at least a week to go to get through everything. The good news is that I feel like this second round of drafts is well needed, and the end result should be much improved when I'm done.